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Whatever She's Got

-Hurricane Punch

Niall's throat burns as he takes another shot, his third one in the past five minutes. Louis' on the dance floor, partying hard. Nashville had always been a place Niall liked, especially since he visited it during the tour. It was nothing special, and of course, Niall was gonna get drunk anyways. Bad drunk.He really wasn't sure why he wanted to come to Nashville. But he likes the shots at this bar, so he's glad he came now.

"Excuse me.''He says, tapping a girl's shoulder. The girl beside him turns around and raises her eye brows, smiling a little.''Yes?''She asks. ''I was wondering...what was a good drink down here? Ya know, one that'll hit me hard.''Niall says, staring into the girl's eyes. She taps her chin lightly then turns to the bar.

''Can I get two Hurricane Punch.''She says to the girl. The girl nods. She turns back around to Niall. ''What's a Hurricane Punch?''He asks her, curious to know what he was about to be drinking. ''Its bascially rum and some fruit punch..its good.''She smirks gently at him. ''Do you like it?''He asks.''Yeah.I drink 'em all the time.''She informs him nodding. ''Alright, then I bet It'll be good.''Niall says with a wink."So, what's your name?''She asks Niall. ''Niall.''He mumbles, ''and you?" he asks her. ''Jenna.''She smiles a tad.

Niall glances at Jenna's chest as he sees a four leaf clover locket around her neck. He gets curious.. ''That's nice.''He says pointing at it. ''It must mean something to you.''Niall says. ''Yeah..it was my great grandmother's.''She says as she touches it with her fingers, looking down at it. ''I'm almost full blooded Irish.''She adds, looking up to see Niall's reaction. ''Really?''He asks.''Yeah. Outside, in the sunlight..if you look close, you can see the hints of red in my hair.''She tells him.

''That's amazing.''He says, mainly to himself. ''This is from Ireland.''She says, referring to the necklace. ''It came from Dublin..that was were my family was from.''She mumbles.''Both sides.''

''Its beautiful.''Niall says.''Here, look inside.''She says. Niall watches as Jenna unclasps the necklace and carefully takes it off. Niall opens the rounded locket. Inside he sees a quote. One the left side it reads: "The Older The Fiddle" And then the right side: "The Sweeter The Tune."

"Its..amazing.''Niall says as he closes it back together. ''Its really old.''she says as she reaches for it.''Here, let me.''Niall says. Jenna turns around and Niall puts the necklace around her neck and clasps it back the way she had it before. ''Thank you.''Jenna smiles kindly as she turns back around to Niall.

"Here you go.''The woman says, sitting a glass in front of each of them. ''Thanks.''Jenna smiles a little. "Well then, Jenna.''Niall pauses as he looks at her then picks up his drink. ''Lets see how good this is.''He says as he puts the rim of the tall glass filled with red stuff.

He takes a sip to end up mainly tasting fruit punch, but a kick of rum. ''Its good.''He says as he sits it down.''Told you.''She says, shrugging.Jenna turns back around to the girl she was talking too before Niall interrupted her.

Niall's eyes still stare at the back of Jenna's head. But he's admiring her long blonde hair. He glances down at her butt, but shortly after his eyes linger to her legs. Golden, soft looking skin. Converses on her feet.

He was so into staring at her and deep in the moment that he hadn't realized Louis had been calling his name. ''What?''he asks as he finally turns to face Louis. ''I...I..uh...uh..forgot.''Louis chuckles to himself. ''You know Lou, you got problems.''Niall says as Louis begins to walk away, bumping into people here and there, and not saying sorry or excuse me.. Mainly because he doesn't even know what he's doing right now.
~
It had been almost an hour since Niall had finished his fruity drink. Jenna had run off to some where and he couldn't find her. It was about five minutes to midnight and he really wanted to be with her while it happened, for some reason. Probably because after midnight, she might leave..or he might.

He looks around, twisting and spinning in all directions possible trying to find her. He couldn't get a sign no where. No giggling. No long blonde hair. No golden skin. Nothing. From the corner of his eye, he caught a glimpse of a plaid shirt. He knew it had to be her.

Niall turns to his left to see her standing a few feet away, talking to a boy that looked some what similar to her, at least in Niall's mind he did.

Niall rushes over to her, pushing through the people. ''Jenna?"He says. She turns to see a rather happy and glad Niall. ''Hi.''She says, smiling at him, letting a laugh out. ''I've been looking every where for you.''He says, out of breath. ''I've been right here the whole time.''She says to him. ''Good, at first I thought you had left..''Niall confesses. ''Jenna, who's this?''The guy asks her.

''Oh Jake, this is Niall. I met him earlier. And Niall, this is my brother, Jake.''Jenna tells them both. Niall looks at Jake, who sends him a dirty glare. Niall looks away, it bothered him. It was a minute to midnight by now. ''Jenna, I wanna ask you something.''He says to her, his voice low, just incase any one would recognize him. But yet, every one here, including him, was drunk.

''Can I have your number?''Niall asks her, shyly. ''Sure.''She laughs a little at how nervous he must have looked to her. ''Here.''She unzips her small cross body bag and takes out a blue pen. She grabs Niall's hand and brings it closer to her. She turns it over and writes down her phone number on his palm.

''Call me tomorrow.''She winks gently as she lets it go. It falls and she turns and walks off. Niall looks down at his palm. Her name,Jenna Moore, her number, and...a note was written in blue ink. There he had it, stained to his hand for a few days until he washed it away.

The words "You're cute" Followed be a heart and "xo" was beside her name. Niall smiled a little as he looked at it again. But finally, he puts his hand down by his side and sighs aloud, still smiling.

But only a little though.


Notes

hey guys. I've never done a story that starts off in a bar, so i hope this goes well! Please comment your thoughts. Should I update? Or delete???

XXX
Love you!
--Bri
thanks for reading!

Comments

@Brianna.Horan

That's ok! anytime. xo

@NiallHoranisaBae132
Thank u babe. :-)

KEEP! I LOVE IT!