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1D fanfic

Chapter 3

I got in his car silently and we drove off. "Where are we going?" i asked nervously. I knew this was stupid, i didn't even know him much, we had only met tonight but i had a feeling i could trust him. I could sense a vibe in people, if they were good or not. I had faced so much in my life, so many people who i thought i could count on had abandoned me. I knew i sensed something about them that made me realize i couldn't trust them but Harry he seemed really trustworthy, i felt like i could go with him anywhere, but i had to be careful i.. "Umm helllo, are you listening?" he said. And i realized how long i was thinking, about my past, my family, my friends and my... my boyfriend... ex boyfriend. Ughh i'm not gonna think about it. "Sorry, I drifted off, you were saying?" i said flatly. I was still hurt with how he treated me. I knew i shouldn't be, i barely knew him but i... i felt like he actually thought of me as a friend and that we could get to know each other. "Well doesn't matter we're already here."He said. It was a hill, i could see the city lights below it, flickering, they were glowing. It seemed peaceful and serene. The moon above, it was a gloss like a piece of glass, It's silvery rays were spread out shedding a faint light on Harry's face, making it seem unreal. "This is my favorite spot, i come here when i like to get away from everything, to clear my head. I wanted to show you this spot cause it's special to me and i feel like you are too, in a way." he spoke. My thoughts were interrupted by him coming closer. I just closed my eyes and let it all in. Me, special? ha! In what way?Well whatever. "Thanks." that's all i could say really. I didn't know what else to say. "I need you to forgive me."he said. "And why is that?"I asked curiously, i mean why would a super star sensation like him care about an apology from a normal girl? "Because... because I think you're different. Just please... i promise you won't regret it." "Okay" i spoke without thinking. Did i want to forgive him, why did i care. Well I had no idea but since i had been through so much already in my life what was the worst that could happen? right? "Okay.. so let's talk more. Tell me more about yourself." he said smiling. I could feel a smile on my face too. Hey maybe this wasn't so bad. huh?
We talked for what seemed like years but was only hours. I told him about my favourite things. I liked the colors pink, black and pastel blue. I like roses and daffodils and tulips and jasmine and almost every flower that had a sweet scent to it, typical, i know. I left out my life details.

Notes

guys sorry more tomorrow promise. just so tired and sleepy

Comments

@XxBriannaxX thankyou I'll try promise. I'm actually thinking of a captivating tittle and and yes i do need to review my grammar. The cover will be uploaded soon thankyou. You have no idea how much this means to me :)

Pink Metaphor Pink Metaphor
8/25/14

this is original. keep up the nice work! i would just worry about the cover, the title, and improving your grammar because their were a few mistakes here and there. but over all, the plot is interesting and if you put a lot of effort into it, it can become big:)

AyeeeBriii AyeeeBriii
8/25/14

omg one subscriber i am sooo happyyyy! thankyou can you tell me who it is? i love youuu

Pink Metaphor Pink Metaphor
8/24/14