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1D fanfic

Chapter 1

Ch 1
I don't own 1D guys plus pleaseeeeeee just comment and tell me what you think of it guys.... love you
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"Okay Alex" my aunt started. "There are goung to be big stars at the party, i want you to have fun but no champagne yet. okay?" "Yess. i get it" i groaned, i really don't want to be here, the last place i wanted to be was somewhere where there are celebrity snobs so full of themselves they won't even care to talk to someone like me. Ahh well. We pulled in the driveway of a huge hotel, i'm talking huge luxurious. We got out of my aunt's ferrari and made our way in. And from there we seperated. My aunt headed to talk to her friendswhile i just started walking hoping to see someone my age. A waiter surpassed me offereing me champagne. I thought for a moment about what Aunt Lisa said but nahh who care i grabbed a glass. It tasted dry yet sweet the fizz tickeled my nose and i giggeled earining a few stares from people.
I sat down on a table near the corner cause i was bored. Scrolling through my phone i was greeted by a thick deep yet warm voice "Hello, mind if i sit here love?" My head shot up and i saw a guy with Chocolate brown curls and emerald green captivating eyes. "Umm sure" i stuttered, a bit embarassed by my american accent. (Ps i really do have and american accent). "You are....?" I asked, i did feel like i had seen him somewhere maybe on a billboard. "You really don't know me?" He said with an amused look. "Cocky much?" I smiled which made him chuckle. "I'm Harry.." "Ohhhh Harry Styles? i know you, sorry!" i cut in and my face flushed. "No need love" he smiled mezmerizing me. "You are..." "Oh right sorry... I'm Alex, Lisa Jones's umm niece" "Ahh right, i can see the resemblance, you're really beautiful" i felt my cheeks getting hot which apparently harry saw cause he smirked. He glanced towards his right and when i turned i saw a group of young guys and girls glancing at us. Assuming they were friends i let it go.
We talked for sometime, i told him about my hobbies, genral things back in LA and he told me more about his tours, Bandmates etc. We had a lot of things in common. We were laighing our heads of when we were greeted by a high pitched girly voice. "Hey Harryyyy babeee" a girl said. She had fake blonde hair and dirty brown eyes(if thats a shade). She wore a hot pink strapless dress bareley covering her bum and loads of accessories. She was model, i could tell. "Uhh hey Ashley babee..." Harry said nervously. Uh oh i had a feeling things were getting awkward.
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There how'd you think it was? Tell me please vote and subscribe. Tell Me how to make it better and suggest a tittle and cover pleasee

Notes

I love you guys just tell me if u like it and how can i make it better?

Comments

@XxBriannaxX thankyou I'll try promise. I'm actually thinking of a captivating tittle and and yes i do need to review my grammar. The cover will be uploaded soon thankyou. You have no idea how much this means to me :)

Pink Metaphor Pink Metaphor
8/25/14

this is original. keep up the nice work! i would just worry about the cover, the title, and improving your grammar because their were a few mistakes here and there. but over all, the plot is interesting and if you put a lot of effort into it, it can become big:)

AyeeeBriii AyeeeBriii
8/25/14

omg one subscriber i am sooo happyyyy! thankyou can you tell me who it is? i love youuu

Pink Metaphor Pink Metaphor
8/24/14