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"Cambridge" Review

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“Cambridge”

Grade: 4

The good things:

-Plot. Very interesting and intriguing.
-The personality of the characters; they were really funny!

Things to work on:

-The format in which you write your chapters was really annoying-both ways.
There were chapters.

Where legit.

It felt like after every sentence.

You pressed the enter button.

It’s annoying.

And I know you’re probably like “But this is written like that”. Well that’s because I’m making a list and a story shouldn’t be like that bro. Andthentherewerechapterswhereitfeltlikeyoudidn’thitthespacebaranditgavemeaheadache.

-Although I like the humorous personalities of the characters I feel like they don’t have any emotion.

Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Probably not, Sorry :/

Notes

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Comments

omg my story is the first on the list ahhhh :3

@JordynHoran
Cool Thanks

@BEEbeautiful
I'll remove it when I get the chance :)

@PUNK_CALUM
wow thanks for asking for someone to review my story I was actually looking for one and I saw my name at the bottom of the list and was like woah

but your name is attached and it looks like your a coauthor and it kinda bugs me don't mean to sound rude tho

Can u review a story called save me by @BEEbeautiful