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"Are You Sure?" Review

BellaRooney

Are You Sure?

Grade: 5.5

The good things:

-Your sentences in the story flow really nicely together and you don't overuse any words like some other people do. You have a very large vocabulary, which is impressive.

Things to work on:

-Paragraph Spacing. It was hard to tell where the different paragraphs started and ended. I lost my place a lot because you didn't space them out enough.

-The story went a little too fast. It shouldn't be dragged out, but at the same time you should give the characters a chance to have a relationship develop (if they makes any sense what so ever. It probably doesn't.)

Would I recommend this story to someone else?: maybe

Notes

sorry for the long wait.
i'm on winter break so i hope to update more :)

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Comments

omg my story is the first on the list ahhhh :3

@JordynHoran
Cool Thanks

@BEEbeautiful
I'll remove it when I get the chance :)

@PUNK_CALUM
wow thanks for asking for someone to review my story I was actually looking for one and I saw my name at the bottom of the list and was like woah

but your name is attached and it looks like your a coauthor and it kinda bugs me don't mean to sound rude tho

Can u review a story called save me by @BEEbeautiful