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"The Hitman" Review

Or Nah...Zayn (Nice Name =D)

The Hitman

Grade: 5

The good things:

-Plot. You’re plot makes white girls can’t even. XD

-Characters look/act cool. I like them. :D

Things to work on:

-Although your characters are really cool, there’s a crap ton of ‘em.

-It was kind of boring. You didn’t reel me in. I’m pretty sure something would happen to make me interested but not as of right now. :/

Would I recommend this story to someone else?: If it got more interesting.

Notes

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Comments

omg my story is the first on the list ahhhh :3

Perla1D @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
1/7/15

@JordynHoran
Cool Thanks

BEEbeautiful @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
1/3/15

@BEEbeautiful
I'll remove it when I get the chance :)

JordynHoran @ OneDirectionFanfiction.org
1/3/15

@PUNK_CALUM
wow thanks for asking for someone to review my story I was actually looking for one and I saw my name at the bottom of the list and was like woah

but your name is attached and it looks like your a coauthor and it kinda bugs me don't mean to sound rude tho

BEEbeautiful @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
1/3/15

Can u review a story called save me by @BEEbeautiful

PUNK_CALUM @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/30/14

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