Good Girls are Bad Girls

I did not have a proper dialogue for the last two chapters and I´m thinking of changing the two new characters that we added. SO I think I might do some revising and editing for the last chapters... I would like some feedback on this because like I´m at school being a sneaky brat looking at my SS teacher so she wont catch lol.
And I really dont know how or where I got the new super natural of Noelle being a creature of some sort so I´ll do some editing on that too. I¨m a weird 13 yr old so haha, but I will do some editing and revising to some of the chapters but I even looked over it myself and I did not get most of it either. I did not understand most of it myself so I understand if most of you guys did not get it as well.
But I will leave Mona´s chapters alone because I think her writing very good in my opinion... We will try to give the best we can to our readers :]

Notes

Annyeong, Bye, Adios, and ALOha to everyone who has read this and I will do editing now haha

BYEEEEEEEEEE