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Black Lace

Chapter 1

WARNING: Highly graphic smut scene. Read at own risk. If you find sexual scenes offensive or are under the age of 18, then please back out now. I don't want any sort of hate coming my way because of the explicit content in the chapter. So, please do not read if you have nothing nice to say.

Chapter Playlist: Closer by Kings of Leon (Don't relate the lyrics with the chapter. Just listen to the tune as you read it.)


Alana stood nervously under the sprinkle of the hot water, trying to act sexy by running her hand over her wet body. She had never shared the shower with anyone in her entire life. Not even Evan. So she had no idea how to seduce a guy in the shower. Did she need to go down on him? The thought made a shiver run down her spine. Who would've thought that all the music videos and movies she had seen, where the couples have sex in the shower, would come to use?

She heard Louis approaching from a distance and despite her decision to pretend like she was experienced with this kind of stuff, Alana stiffened. Louis watched her through the frosted glass pane of the shower and felt his shaft harden even further, if that was possible. She was a delectable little thing; her body well toned with just the right amount of curves.

Louis made his way into the shower booth and put his hand around her waist from behind. He instantly felt her stiffen her body even more. Louis laid his hand on her shoulder, gently massaging the tensed muscles with his fingers. After a few minutes, Louis felt her relax and Alana turned to look at him.

Alana's breath hitched when she saw how the water was running down his body, leaving trails of droplets here and there. He looked even more gorgeous with his wet hair slicked back and eyes darkened with lust. Alana couldn't control herself and plunged forward.

Their lips locked together; tongues probing deep into each other's mouths, making Alana moan. Louis chuckled softly against her lips at her eagerness. He had started to think that he had dreamt up the night before, what with her acting all shy and virginal this morning. But it looked like she was as feisty as ever.

Louis' hand found its way into her hair, and he slid the other one down the slick wetness of her back to the curve of her butt cheeks, pulling her towards him. There was something extremely hot about this beautiful girl being naked and pressed up against his naked body.

Amidst their moans and gasps, Louis felt Alana feeling up his body aimlessly and ending up leaving scratches in her desire to touch every inch of his body. Their torsos pressed together under the hissing, steamy shower of the water, and Louis felt her ripe breasts against his bare skin; her nipples hard pebbles.

Louis used his body to push the two of them fully into the cascade of the hot water from the shower, slowly working one of his legs in between hers. Alana raised a leg to the side of his waist and started to grind herself on his thigh. The heat of her against him was amazing, and Louis could also feel a moistness that he knew wasn't water.

Louis couldn't control himself any further and he got down on his knees, making Alana stiffen once again. Louis reached over and slid her legs apart, gently stroking circles against her inner thighs to make her relax. Once he felt her lean back against the wall, Louis lifted one of her legs over his shoulder. His hand tightly grasped her ass, raising her hips enough to leave trails of kisses on her soaking sex.

"Louis!" Alana gasped in pleasure, grabbing the knob of the shower to keep her knees from buckling. Alana tried to press herself harder against his face but the angle she was standing in wouldn't allow her. Louis teased her clit with his tongue; licking and sucking it in a steady rhythm. Alana's legs tightened around his head, tightly holding on as not to fall.

Louis could feel her begin to throb as he held her up with one hand. Alana's body began to shake violently but before she could go over the edge, Louis stood up and guided his dick along the lips of her groin till it reached her clit; hearing a sigh emerge from her lips as he gently moved back and forth.

"Louis, please!" Alana begged for him to stop teasing her and make the next move, shooting him a pleading look. Louis took his shaft and plunged it straight into her. He slipped easily inside due to the moistness in her inner thigh, making her gasp at his thickness.

"Fuck, babe!" Louis breathed out, when he felt her tightness wrap around his manhood.
Alana moaned as Louis withdrew almost the whole way and then slid back in, setting up a rhythm. She soon started to join Louis, pressing back against him as he thrusted hard and fast.
The room was full of steam, but Alana didn't know if it was the water or the two of them. Louis stroked his hands up and down her back as he fucked her.

He saw her gasping and moaning faster, breath coming out in shallow puffs. Her face faded as his eyes closed when Louis felt himself start to go over the edge. He knew he was going to come and he felt spasms of pleasure erupting through his body when he felt her inner muscles quiver and a gush of hot liquid envelop his shaft. He let himself tip over the edge as well as he spilt what felt like floods into her hot core.


Notes




A/N:
Hello there, my bellas! So, I was extremely surprised by the response since I didn't think any would give the story a single read. Thank you to those who have subscribed, voted and commented! :) I love you guys! Please continue voting, subscribing and commenting if you want me to go on?

Question:
Was the chapter too graphic for you guys? Do you want me to tone down the smut scenes? Or should I continue like this? I made this chapter short on purpose so that you guys can wrap your heads around my writing. Your feedback will be highly appreciated! :)

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