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Something To Live Up To

Trinta e Quatro

I heard the doorbell and quickly put my heels on.
Sighing I took one last glance at the mirror, inspecting my looks and make sure my dress was as it should.
Today was the event every girl want to attend, the prom so I wanted to be perfect.

Prom Dress:



I headed downstairs carefully not to fall in my high heels and spotted my date, Ben, with a suit perfectly ironed and tie with the same color as my dress, something we had combined before.
My mum was already at the door talking to him very politely.

"Wow Mia, you look amazing!" He averted his wide eyes to me.

"Thank you." I blushed at his compliment.

"Oh my baby!" My mother hugged me tightly visibly emotioned.

"Mum I'm not going to marry, it's just a prom!" I tried to push her away not to crease my clothes.

"I know, but it's emotional." She defended.

I rolled my eyes and looked at Ben.

"Ready?" I adjusted his tie.

"Yeah, let's go. I'll take good care of her." He assured turning to my mother.

"I'll let you know at what time I'll be coming." I pecked my mother's cheek and entwined my arm with Ben's.

"My brother will be taking us in his car, it's faster." He told me opening the door for me.

In no time we reached the place where we were having lunch with everyone.
It had a beautiful green garden and an arc in the entrance for the couples to take the familiar picture.

"Let's go meet the others!" I told him.

I looked around and saw all my friends talking happily.

"Hey guys." I greeted everyone.

"Damn Mia, you look hot." Ana pinched my butt jokingly.

"Not here Annie." I winked.

"Students please let's get in, the dinner is ready." A teacher informed us.

We all entered and looked for our names in the circled tables.



"This looks beautiful." InĂªs gasped behind me.

"It really does." I agreed with her.

We all sat around and ate talking about everything from these last years together. It felt really nice to be gethered with everyone in this confortable environment.

"Lets dance." Ben invited when the music popped up.

"Sure." I accepted.

After a long hour every girl had thrown the shoes to a courner and were now dancing like crazy on a competion girls vs boys. Suddenly the DJ cuts the current music and plays macarena. Quickly everyone joins and start dancing to the familiar rythm.

When the song ended I was gasping for air so I decided to sit a little on the table and check my phone. I had a few missed calls from Harry and a text.

From: Harry
Where are you? Call as soon as you get this. H .xx


With a big grin I went to the balcony and dialed Harry's number.

"Mia finally." His voice showed relief.

"What is it? Are you okay?"

"Yeah. I just wanted to check up on you."

"I'm at prom right now so I didn't have my phone with me."

"Well I wanted to tell you something..." He hesitated.

"What is is?" I askd eagerly.

"I have something for you."

"For me?"

"Yeah I have a prom gift for you."

"Are you serious?"

"Of course I am." He seemed offended.

"What is it?"

"Well that's the point. The present I have for you is not there. I need you to go somewhere to take it."

"Right now?"

"Yes."

"But I'm still in the middle of the party!" I told him not understanding his point.

"Please?"

"Where was I supposed to go?"

"That beach you normally go, your favourite one."

"How do you know I have a favourite beach?"

"It doesn't matter. My present is there waiting for you."

"Harry I don't know if I can't leave, I don't have how to."

"Can't you take a cab?"

"Well yeah but..."

"Please?" He almost begged. "I promise you it'll be worth it."

"Humm..." I considered that for a while. "Okay." I sighed.

"Really?" His voice lit up.

"I promise you, it better be the best present ever!" I warned.

"I think it will."

"It better be or I won't forgive you."

"You're the best! Bye babe." He hung up.

Why was he so eager for me to go there right now? What could be so important that couldn't wait a few more hours.
I entered the salon and said goodbye to everyone, explaining to my bestfriends the weird call.


-


I thanked the taxi driver and got out holding my dress and taking my shoes on the way to the sand.
It was desert and there was no sign of anything.
I took the phone from the wallet and called him.

"Harry? What's going on?" I asked getting annoyed. "There's no sigh of whatever is supposed to come up now."

"You're a bit impatient today aren't you?" He asked amused.

"You made me get out of my own prom with the promise I'd have the biggest present waiting for me. Well, there's nothing here." I looked from one side to another.

"Yes there is." He spoke calmly. "Turn around."

Obbeying, I turned around looking for something.

"Oh my God." I gasped dropping the phone on the sand.

Comments

@malik_gurl
Thank you!! I'm not very happy with this fic actually because I wrote it a while ago and it has toooons of mistakes like spelling and all so in the aspect I think the sequel is better and I hope you like it, I've received a lot of positive comments on the sequel... :)
Yeah, Portuguese! Yes I'm portuguese from Portugal that's the reason why it has so many errors like I told you above. x

So i just finished this fan fiction and i absolutly love it!!! <3 nobody absolutly nobody can or will change my mind about that and i am very happy you are making a sequal becuase that was a major cliff hanger!!!! Anyways i really pove this story and i am very glad you wrote it! And i have one question: do you speak porgougeuse? (And sorry if i spelt it wrong)

ohw,i didn't c that part

crushingonniall crushingonniall
2/15/14

@crushingonniall
This story is no longer updated, only the sequel.. ;)
xx

DreamLand DreamLand
2/14/14

please update...

crushingonniall crushingonniall
2/13/14