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Immortal life

Chapter 9

Louis p.o.v
I pinned Niall to the wall, him talking wasn’t helping it was making me worry more and focus my mind on the blood, which I didn’t want but why can’t I control my thirst I really need to drink but they’re not helping.

“why is he like this?” I head Liam asked.

“full moon maybe?” Zayn questioned.

“Harry do something block his senses it might get him to calm down” El said panicked. Harry was focusing on me and I punched him in the stomach, I have no idea why but I did.

“that’s not going to help!” I growled wait growled?

“we won’t know unless he tries” Rachel said helping Niall up. I looked around to see a mixture of worried but stern looks surrounding me.

“stop it!” my voice boomed before I clutched my head and knelt on the ground.

“guys back off a bit this is getting overwhelming for him” Zayn said he came over and told me to take deep breaths and focus on something that makes me happy and I felt myself calm down.

“What’s happening to me?” I asked, asking myself more than anyone else.

“your wolf was trying to break free” Zayn replied.

“What?” I asked.

“ok so I think your transition has been different than mine but I think that’s because of your vampire side but your wolf like mine if you get angry or if your heartbeat picks up you start to change, but don’t worry like me you’ll gain control of it” Zayn said helping me up.

As I stood I looked at everyone and the looked at me worried, I touched my temples where pain shot through them, but I shrugged it off. “can we go now?” I asked and they nodded and we walked down the streets back to Niall and Rachel’s flat. Whilst we were walking I felt like someone was watching me so I looked back to see if anyone was following me and as I did I saw I presume a gir who had a hood up with long ginger hair sticking out and I could see her plumped scarlet red lips but the rest of her face remained a mystery.

No one had stopped for me so I quickly ran towards her and she ran down an alley where I followed, when I turned I saw it was Valerie the girl from my dream.

“it’s you” I snarled.

“well it’s nice to see you too” she smirked.

“what the fuck did you do to me? Why did you make me a hybrid?” I asked.

“i was sick of being the only hybrid, you’re the strongest out of your little clan so you’re the only one that will survive the transformation” she said walking towards me.

“I didn’t want this!” I shouted.

“so you don’t want to be powerful and un-killable?” she said circling me.

“no I’d rather be normal” I said.

“Too bad now are you going to come with me so you’ll survive?” she asked.

“fuck you I’m leaving” I said turning towards the alley opening.

“you’ll die without me” she shouted.

“I’m un-killable remember!” I shouted back and rolled my eyes but she pinned me against the wall.

“Get the fuck off of me you bitch!” I shouted struggling in her grasp.

“you’re coming with me if you like it or not!” she snarled showing her fangs. Before she had the chance to take me her skin turned extremely pale and her eyes became lifeless before she was pulled off of me and I saw Harry standing there.

“why did you leave?” he asked.

“that girl you just staked is the girl who turned me” I said.

“come on let’s go then” he said.

“hybrids can’t die but here she is dead?” I asked confused.

“let’s wait for a few minutes and see what happens then” Harry said we waited and she sat up and pulled the stake out of her chest.

“run” I shouted and we ran at vampire speed towards Niall and Rachel’s flat.

“where did you two go?” Liam asked.

“I went to find Louis who found the girl who changed him she can’t be killed” Harry said. The pain in my head increased but I once again ignored it.

“what did she want?” Rachel asked.
“she wanted me to go with her” I said.

“Why?” Emma asked.

“she said that I’d die without her but I can’t die so I tried to walk away but then she pinned me and she’s extremely strong but Harry staked her but she came back and now we’re here” I said I walked away and into the kitchen trying to figure out if I wanted food or blood but I couldn’t pick my body wanted neither.

“why don’t you try putting some blood into some food like have chips but have blood over them” Rachel shouted from the sitting room. I ignored her and grabbed a blood bag, once I finished I placed it in the bin before walking into the sitting room.

After an hour of talking I felt sick, the pain in my head burned and my stomach twisted I quickly got up and ran towards the kitchen and throwing up all contents in my stomach.

“Lou are you ok?” Niall asked.

“I’m fine the blood must have been off or something” I said grabbing a glass of water to get the nasty taste out of my mouth.

“the blood isn’t off it’s fresh we got it yesterday” Rachel shouted from the sitting room.

“so why did I be sick after drinking it?” I questioned walking into the sitting room.

“maybe your body is healing it’s self from some illness you might have caught and as a reflex it’s making you sick” Liam said.

“wouldn’t I be feeling the symptoms of the illness so it’s not that” I said.

“maybe you’re just sick but you’ll heal soon so it doesn’t matter” Ally said.

“maybe I don’t know but I’m going to bed I’m tired” I said walking up the stairs.

“Lou it’s only 3pm” Zayn said.

“It’s been a stressful day and I feel really tired, plus it’s the full moon later I’ll need my strength” I said walking away. I went to my room and had a shower and just wearing a pair of joggers I decided to check my bites to see if they disappeared. I looked in the mirror to see it wasn’t healing but it was in fact getting worse. I panicked a little but calmed down knowing the boys will pick up on my irregular heartbeat if they were listening and got into bed falling asleep instantly.

Notes

Another update i had nothing to do so here's the next update

Comments

@Emmaaaa
Hi. I love your stories , and I was wondering if you could add me as a co-author. I would like to be able to continue this story as it is a very entertaining topic. Reply or message me if you get the chance!
p.s. I could also help with revisions.
p.p.s. I know what it feels like having so much going on at school and stuff I have 9 periods and get out at 4:15 I know what it feels like.

@Harry's Kitty Kat
i'm sorry i'm not continuing with this story or any other fanfictions. i'm not writing anymore, i'm sorry i don't do this type of stuff anymore i've instead started up a blog (fashion, beauty & lifestyle) and i'm going off to college and i might be getting a job soon it's too much and i don't enjoy doing this stuff as much i'm sorry...

Please update this story! :(

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Omg this is killing me please update :*