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Demented ➳ h.s [Editing Starting Soon]

New Years Surprises

HARRY'S POV
NEW YEARS EVE

Never have I ever had a worse New Years Eve. The closest thing to alcohol in this place is the deathly acidic orange juice. Plus the fact there would be no ass-tapping for a while made me want to pull my hair out. Charlotte was called in again but to permanently stay. Thinking about Charlotte was the closest thing I had to keep from actually going insane. She's beautiful, yes, but not my type. She's too... independent? I mean, an independent woman is nice but you still need to spoil her. Oh, fuck me, what am I thinking? With any luck, the closest I'll ever get to another female is by changing the therapist.

Also the fact that I'll never be released from here scared me. What really turned my mood around was the fact that after at least five years, I'll really be insane. I'm already losing it. Louis. How can he come here after what he did? Look at me and not apologize for what he did to me. Probably adding to my insanity. Before my thoughts processed more in depth, the door jiggled a bit and opened. There was Charlotte.

In her usual jacket, usual makeup, and a ponytail in the middle of her head. It left me astonished how someone so beautiful could live on Earth. "Good morning, Harry."

"What time is it?" Sadly the rooms weren't equipped with alarm clocks because they're breakable. And able to be thrown...

"About 10:00," she pushed her hair back and it fell back to her shoulder. "I just came to sit in here, I do that a lot." Charlotte's voice was sad and empty, inferior.

"What's wrong with you?" I hadn't meant for that to come out as blunt as it did but there was no taking it back. She sat next to me and picked at the skin around her nails, then traveled to her nail polish.

She sighed and whispered, "Nothing." I decided not to push her into telling me and laid back. Her smile was bright and a single dimple appeared on her left cheek. I could see the adoration and lust for me in her eyes, as conceited as it sounds. Her pupils moved over to my tattoos in the short-sleeved, alternate jumper. "They're beautiful," she commented, breathy.

Allowing her finger to trace over the ones on my arm was a mistake. That mistake caused the air to get thicker and the sexual tension in the room to rise. Sexually, I am highly attracted to Charlotte. I'd have her now if I could but I can't. And that sucked. "Yeah," I whispered back.

I propped up on my shoulders and took a good look at her. Her eyes were brown, but not the boring brown everyone else has. They were beautiful and popped. My face leaned in and she went to close her eyes but stopped when an announcement came on, "Charlotte Huntington, please report to Ms. Hannigan's office, Charlotte Huntington." I cleared my throat and sat up, rubbing my face with my hands.

"I-I should go," I agreed and she swiftly walked out. That moment left me thinking. Had Ms. Hannigan not come on the announcer, would Charlotte have kissed me? Hopefully she couldn't see my want for her. They say they can read me like an open book, I guess that's why I got a closed one tattooed on my arm.

CHARLOTTE’S POV

The walk to Ms. Hannigan’s office killed me, or maybe it was the fact that’d I’d nearly handled a patient in the most unprofessional way. What if she knows? I mean, she knows everything that goes on around here, how could she not know?

Her not knowing about the subject was obvious because once I walked in, she had the same smile she had plastered on her face once I left early for America. “Charlotte, take a seat,” she smiled widely.

That was the first time she’d ever called me by my first name. Her now smooth hands were folded. Things about her were slowly changing and it was scaring me to say the least. The sunlight was shining through the window and happened to fixate on her left hand. That ring. That was the same ring she wore before her husband disappeared, and now it was back, “Wow,” I exclaimed, shocked, “it’s beautiful. So, everything’s okay now?” I asked, even though things would have to be okay for her to be wearing the cursed ring yet again.

“Perfection,” her smile faded and her eyes locked with mine. They showed a type of evil that was too horrid to describe in words. I gulped loudly but nothing changed, her lips formed into a flat line. Samuel appeared in the door, knocking.

The knocking sent her out of the trance-like state she was in and her smile poofed right back on her face. The change in mood didn’t give me enough time to change mine and I continued to stare at her.

“Ms. Hanni-”

“It’s Mrs. Davis, honey. It’s Mrs. Davis,” she spoke to Samuel with a forced tone, “maybe you should go, Charlotte. I have other things to do.” And with that, I was dismissed.

LIZ’S POV

Beeping and flashes of light surrounded my bed. The breaths of many doctors were on my face and lower body, it was highly uncomfortable and on the verge of disturbing. When they finally left, the room smelled like more medicine than could possibly be contained in a hospital. Carla opened the door and peeked her head in, “Hey, Liz. How ya doin’?”

Carla turned out to be quite a cool nurse. Her hair was up again and she had the same tray she always brought me at 5:03 in the evening. “I’m better, can’t wait to get out of here,” I answered.

“Just a few more weeks, dear. Just a few more weeks,” although she couldn’t be and older than maybe twenty-four, she called me cute names that made me feel special. Sure, I sound like a child on Christmas morning but hearing those names and nice things is like getting everything you wanted when before, I was going under the tree and leaving empty-handed. I have no idea if that analogy was even correct considering they've had be high on any medication they can search for for the past few days.

“Good, I love having you as a nurse and all, but this place sucks.”

“Ha, you’re a good patient. Although, the reason you’re here isn’t good. Anyway,” she spoke when leaving my pudding and things on the side table, “you have a guest. It’s your brother. Come on in!” she shouted.

At first, I was worried because never have I ever had a brother. Then, once he walked in, I recognized him. His beard had grown out and he’d gotten a few inches taller. His style and hair was different, a bit edgier. Otherwise, he was the same. “Evening, Sis.” His greeting was covered in a smirk and flowers came from behind him.

“I’ll leave you two alone to catch up,” Carla said and walked out, closing the door behind her.

“Liz,” he said, “you don’t look as well as I remember.”

I smirked and rolled my eyes, snatching the flowers from him and setting them down on the table when he walked up. His shoes squeaked on the tile from the wet snow outside, “Nice to see you too, Louis.”

Notes

Soooo, Liz and Louis know each other.. interesting. Sorry I've been, like, dead lately, tests and shit were killing me. But, l have mid-winter break currently. This is my to-do list for the next week:

* sitting around
* eating
* texting
* flirting, because my valentine never asked me out
* basically just flirt texting my best guy friend
* more eating
* sitting around, drinking hot cocoa
* reading fanfictions
* wondering why John Green isn't known as the best author of all time

Comments

@Hopeless Directioner
Actually, the whole summary is different. I made up a quote that may or may not go into the story and just the basic summary isn't even a summary, it's suspenseful. Again, I hope you like the new version as much as you liked the old.

svmmertime svmmertime
5/18/14

@Hopeless Directioner
Some will be minute but most will be obvious. Some conversations are edited so that Harry is more closed up. All in all, the story will be longer. There is a new introduction and just a bunch of things I wasn't comfortable with. A lot of editing was needed and the cover was terrible. And so, the edited first chapter is up along with a new introduction. I really hope you like it, darling x

svmmertime svmmertime
5/18/14

@wonderful .
I'm excited to see how it'll be revised! Will the changes be minute or obvious?

@Hopeless Directioner

I will be editing and taking out and adding in parts. Honestly, Demented went waaay too fast in my opinion, and with the plagiarism and all, I found that I really want to rewrite it anyway. I will obviously be keeping this version up but I have already started the new version and the whole first chapter is different. I just think the story could have stretched at least to 35 chapters or more. Again, this WILL stay up, but the new version will be posted separately. Mind you, it will take at least a few months for me to do it since I have other stories, but I'm sick from school today so I'm going to continue. I was hoping everyone would like that it's being revised and bettered a bit, do you?

svmmertime svmmertime
5/16/14