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Lost In Your Demise

Chapter 2

Months, weeks and days passed by and Louis's condition didn't get any better. He'd spend his days sitting up in bed, reading a book every day. His only visitors were his parents and his girlfriend, Ophelia. Each day, Ophelia would notice Louis was becoming more and more frail and weak. He used to smile and be cheerful even when he was diagnosed with Leukaemia. But now he's bed ridden and exhausted.

Louis knew he had little time left.
Ophelia knew he had little time left.
Yet it didn't stop them from loving each other as much as they did. Every day was a stressful, painful and tiring one. Ophelia would cry herself to sleep and often wake up with a headache. She began to break down, not just mentally, but also physically. Her skin was sickly pale and veins stood out against it. She barely ate a thing and stayed in her room all day when she didn't visit Louis, which was a rare occurrence. She'd spend as much time as possible with Louis.

Then the day came. September 15th. A day just like any other Ophelia had thought.
She quickly got her purse from in her bedside dresser and tied her hair in a ponytail. Rushing out of the house, she opened the garage door and inside was a bright, red Honda. She opened the door of the car and slammed into the seat. She turned on the engine and started driving to the hospital, to visit Louis of course. After around 10 minutes, she parked her Honda in the car park and locked the car after getting out. She speed-walked into the building and went to the front desk.
"I'd like to see Louis Tomlinson, please," she requested politely but hurriedly.
"I'm sorry, Miss. But Louis Tomlinson has... deceased," the woman muttered, a solemn look on her face.

Ophelia's purse dropped from her hand and she stood astonished, her eyes wide showing fear. Not long after, her eyes welled up in tears and they slid down her pallid, bony cheeks in streams. Her mouth quivered and she crouched to the ground, covering her face with her hands. She let out a blood-curdling cry before whimpering and wiping her tears. "W-why did it have to be him?! Why couldn't it have been me!" she screamed, banging her hands on the floor. People all around her stared at the young girl in pity. Nurses tried to come to her aid but she refused to speak and forcefully pushed them away. Her body shivered and she ran her fingers through her ponytail, ripping out long strands of hair.

At last she stood up, grabbing her purse, before stumbling out, face down.
She didn't want people to see her weak and vulnerable.
She didn't want to see the expressions of pity on the faces.
She exited the building, ignoring the people who asked if she was alright. "Of course, I'm not alright, you idiots," she groaned inwardly. As she stepped out of the building, she met eye to eye with the scowl-worthy sunlight. She dragged herself towards the car. She began to feel dizzy. Her stomach churned in hunger but she overlooked it and continued to her car. But she never made it. She collapsed to the ground, breathing heavily; sweat dripping from her forehead. One last, single tear fell from her left eye as she uttered, "I love you, Louis..."
Then everything went black...


Notes

A/N- As i was typing part of the ending got deleted since I accidently pressed control+z. Anyway I hope you like this chapter and sorry if there is any grammar and punctuation mistakes :P! Comment and whatever if you want~

Comments

@oneeeddd

haha thx again ^^ and ill try to update when I can!

DAwg123 DAwg123
12/15/13

Whoa man!! this is such a good story......BETTER UPDATE SOON !! no joke you cant leave the story like that- I'm not joking

oneeeddd oneeeddd
12/15/13
OH. MY. GOD!
Love_Life Love_Life
11/20/13
Damn Gurl! That was so awesome! I rated you 10 stars! Be thankful c:
Keep up the good work gurl :3
HotMama HotMama
11/20/13