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Those Eyes

Chapter Seven

The song for this chapter is Angels by The Xx.




The car ride to Nina’s was quite, but comfortable. When we got into her apartment I broke the 30 minute long silence.

“Did you mean it?” I asked, watching her close her front door behind her.

“Mean what?” She asked gazing up at me.

“The song, the last song you sang. Did you mean it?”

“I never sing something I don’t mean.”

That was enough for me. I closed the space between us and crashed my lips to hers. She instantly responded, her lips moving against mine in a fluid motion. My hands ran down her sides, landing on the side the back of her thigh. I grabbed them and pulled them around my waist and carried her away from the front door. We made our way down the hallway when Nina spoke.

“I love you, Harry.”

I stopped in my tracks and looked into her eyes. I saw another one of her walls crash to the ground when she spoke those words. I knew that it took everything in her to say those words. I knew that I loved her from the first time I heard her sing. The first time I heard such raw emotion pour out from deep in her soul.

“Nina..” I tried to steady breath so I didn't mess up the words I so desperately wanted to speak. “I love you.” Her eyes scanned over the entirety of my face before her lips met mine again. I made my way the rest of the way down the hallway to her bedroom; closing the door behind us.


Notes

Chapter Seven! Let me know what you thought!


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xx

-L

Comments

@Ciao Niccie

You don't have any idea how much your feedback means to me. :) Thank you so much. It makes me happy to see that this story will stay with you. I could have been more descriptive, but I thought that it would take away from the rawness of the story. And I also wanted the readers imagination to flow with my own.

It's perfectly fine that you listened to Skyskraper, I', just happy that you listened to music at all, since it is a big part of the story.
awaywithwords awaywithwords
11/12/13
I earnestly implore you to heed my words in their literal and true form... I have never stumbled upon a story, regardless the length, that has moved and stirred such compassion for a character, both characters, like this one. When I read about people crying in their comments, I am skeptical at times, but today I did. It's bittersweet. And although it was dark, it had a different essence to it . . . I almost can't describe it. But this was beautiful and I truly felt like I captured what you were eager to express in this masterpiece. I hope more people recognize and praise you for this story. It deserves more votes than the repetitive scripts that linger on here... This story will haunt me, in a good way.

p.s. I cheated by listening to skyscraper on chapter 11, I was a mess.
not working not working
11/11/13
Chpater 1: This is a different way to start a story, but I feel the sad intro sets a good platform for the rest of the chapters, which I like. It's sobering. I like the glimpse of normal and cute conversation, but then I'm reminded of the beginning again... Okay on with the show....chap 2....
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11/11/13