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Taken

Please don't hurt me.

Harry's POV

"No fair you cheated!"
"Did not!"
"Did too!"
I woke up to Louis and Zayne argueing about video games...AGAIN. As usual Liam was trying to break them up amd Niall was eating.
"We are about two hours from Atlanta, so get your stuff together." Paul said to us.
The place was a mess. There were clothes and garbage all over the tour bus. Zayne, Liam, Niall and I began cleaning while Louis just stated out the window. Louis started yelling that a van had gone into the river and that we needed to pull over. The bus quickly stopped and we all ran outside. I saw three men running away from the van.
"Is any body else in the van?" Liam yelled to the men.
A man with a black beard was laughing and yelled, "She's probably dead now!"
What does he mean she is probably dead now? There must be a girl on the van still. I can't just sit here while she dies. I have to save her.
"I'm going in." I said to my friends. They started to say you can't or you will just die too. I shook my head and told them I had to. I ripped my coat and shoes off and told the boys and Paul to call 911. I dove into the water and broke through the back window. I saw a girl with nothin but pure fear in her eyes. She was the most beautiful girl i have ever seen before. She had been tied up and was wearing nothing but her bra and panties. She looked at me and her eyes closed she look dead. I swam over to her and started untieing the rope that held her to the van. When I untied it I grabbed her waist. I pulled her out of the window and scrambled to get air. When I got to the service she wasn't breathing. The boys helped me pull her out of the water. We laid her down, but she still wasn't breathing. Liam spoke up, "We have no service, but Paul is trying to call for help"
I began doing CPR. She wasn't waking up, but I need to keep trying. Then she started coughing up water. She looked at me a started to try to get out of my grip.
She began crying and she looked up at us and said, "Please don't hurt me. All I want is to get home. Please I'll do what ever you want."
i picked her up bridal style and said to her, "You are safe, I won't let anybody hurt you."
She looked up at me with kind eyes and she wrapped her arms around my neck. She drifted off to sleep in my arms.

Comments

Ok I did it the story is called taken and it's exactly the same as this one I can keep writing. I'm sorry if any of you guys are confused and if you have any questions just message me or comment on my other take. Story.
Sorry girls I can't get my tumblr account to work so I'm going to copy and paste all of my chapters to my new account so I can continue my story. It's still going to be called the same thing
Holy shit I'm pissed. I'm the writer of taken but I can't login to my account. I just made this one and I'm really sorry if I can't update. I made another with google but my other one was with tumblr and I can't login with it. I also tried it on my computer too and still nothing. I'm going to try everything I can to fix my dumb account. Any suggestions?
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Thanks girls!!!
WE COULD WHAT?!?!?! ohhh please update!! pretty prettyplease:( are they gonna do like spin the bottle?truth or dare? skinny dipping?! anyways update pretty please:) xx
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2/20/13