Fanfiction 101
Little Black Dress
(8) Okay, I’m ashamed to admit it, but I think I’m the only Directioner who hasn’t listened to the new album… I know for a fact that ‘Little Black Dress’, is one of the songs as well as ‘Diana’, but I can’t really relate to them. I just wanted to get that out of the way before I start the review.
Other than the fact that you’ve used a song title as your title, I feel like a lot of your story is really typical. However, I think there is a fine line between typical and that mood where I need to remember what a good cliché romance to remind me what good writing is. I really needed one of those stories.
I absolutely adored the characters and complications – to a certain extent. There were times when you used typical lines and ideas that I can’t stand, but I don’t think you could have written it any other way.
To be honest, I’d actually already been subscribed and reading along after the first few chapters that you started writing this story. Usually, after a few overused ideas, I would unsubscribe and just stop reading the story, but there aren’t many stories like yours. I like it.
If you found this review to be disappointing, I'm can't say I'm sorry. As I said, I am a brutally honest person, or so people tell me. If you would like me to take this down, I will, just ask me. Don't bitch about it either; I don't care what you think, I'm just telling you what I think. Don't get mad, you asked for it. Don't rate this badly just because you don't like what I say. But on the off chance you like what I'm telling you, I'm glad you could learn something from me.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16