Fanfiction 101
What You Call Love
(7) You are a greatly known author, but I’m still going to say your story is typical. (If you’re a fan of this story, don’t hate on me. I’m just giving my honest opinion, but if you feel the need to bitch about it, go ahead. I don’t honestly care).
It is possible that you were the one who started this whole trend with the story line, but I can’t be sure and the plot is giving me a headache. I can say that it is better than that of most “I left with your child but here you are wanting to be in her life” kind of stories, but even so, I’m still sick of all those stories.
I do like how they had to go through the whole court thing for custody and now they live together. You have a lot more drama, and I love drama because it just leaves me wanting to read more.
Sometimes, though, your grammar can be a little downhill [poor]. If you take more time to reread and edit your story, it would make your writing a whole lot better. Overall, your story is okay; it’s just basic.
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16