Fanfiction 101
Like Crazy
(9) This is probably one of the best stories I've review so far. The plot line is different, unique, and I love different! She uses proper spelling and punctuation, and the story has a nice flow to it. I only had a few problems with your story, but it's nothing too big.
One, you had a few author's notes as chapters that are irrelevant to your story. You should delete those chapters, because you don't need them anymore. The second problem I had was the constant changing of character's POV. Sometimes if you're constantly changing these, it gets confusing for readers to know whose point of view their reading from.
Other than that, I really loved your story. I'm really curious to see what happens next because I completely ship Julia with Harry. I'll be waiting for your next update :) [Link]
If you find your review to be disappointing, I cannot honestly tell you that I’m sorry. Do not let what I say in any way discourage you from writing or anything for that matter. I am just one person with strongly opinionated views on everything. If I made it clear that I strongly dislike your story, do not think that other people won’t enjoy it. There are many other readers with different views than me who will find interest in your story where I may not have. I hope you do take something out of this and improve on and continue your writing, but if you don’t, that’s fine too.
@That_clifford_girl
Hi! I don't normally do this but I'm just gonna get right on it.
It's in my knowledge that this author isn't coming back. Which means your review isn't coming. But! I recently started up a review store so if you're interested you can link your story there.
All you have to do is click my name and follow the form. :-)
12/31/16