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punk romeo and dark Juliet

chapter 1

Autumn's P.O.V.

"Autumn wake up!!! It's time to get ready for school!!!" my mom shouted from the living room floor. 'ugh.. i don't want to' I grunted to myself. "make me!!!" i yelled back, i knew it was a bad idea to talk back but I didn't care. I lay back down and next think I know *splash!* i'm soaking wet. " what the he-"i quickly responded. " Don't EVER talk back to me" she cut me off and walked out of my room the next second. 'whatever' I quietly said to myself. I got up out of bed and walk to the shower. I quickly threw my pajamas to the floor and hopped in the warm water. A few minutes later I hear loud bangs on the door.. " Autumn get out I need to take a shower to!!!" my sister jade shouted back with impatience. "wait your fucking turn!!!" I yelled back. I quickly hop out when I finished rinsing off. When i finish drying off i quickly got dressed in this.

Next I started on my make-up when i got a text from my bestie Cecilia.. i call her cc for short

CC: are you ready yet?

ME: no, let me finished putting on my make-up

CC: ok but hurry up.. you know Danielle doesn't like it when we're late

I quickly finished putting my make-up on and ran down stairs. i scooped up my backpack and ran towards the door. i grabbed the handle and was about to go when my little sister charizma ( i call her crizzy for short) called my name.I turned around and scooped her little body in my arms holding her in a warm hug. " i gotta go crizzy.. see you when i get home" i pecked her on the cheek and ran out the door. She is my one and only weakness.

Notes

so.. what do you think.. should i keep going?
it's a bad beginning but hopefully it gets better..
if you have any ideas let me know, :)

Comments

It fine with me, like I said it was just a suggestion. I'm just honored that your using it at all.
@Candy monster
sure, i was looking for something new anyways.
:D
@i am a directioner
Okay...I know I'm seriously going to sound needy here...but could you read my story, I know people say and comment that it's good but honestly I'm not too sure. I just want advice from people who have "experience" so to speak, on writing storys that are amazing, like yours, on how to make my story better. So, if it's not too much trouble, could you? I mean you don't have to if you don't want to..it's just that...well...yeah, I'm just going to stop before thing get awkwarder (is that a word...to bad, fuck grammar, I just made up a word.)
@Candy monster
lol. yeps
@i am a directioner
Thanks...I'm just awesome like that. :)