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Be Yourself.

Chapter 4.

Louis POV. When we walked to the back , i knew the rest wouldn't notice if Abby and i wouldn't be there. I want her right here right now , i can't wait for Harry to take her right before my eyes.I needed to react quick, so the rest won't notice, and so i did. I pulled her with me and put her against the wall, and i just couldn't get my eyes off of her. Ok Louis this is your chance, just do it ,then you know if see feels the same. On that moment she just crashed her lips on mine ,what shocked me but after a few seconds i kissed her back. She softly held my head between her gentle and soft hands, wich let my hand just softly slide down her hips right on her perfect bottom. Then she did this think with her thumb what was extremely nice , she just softly stroke over my check with it, God she's amazing. When i pulled away i just looked in her eyes because i knew she felt as amazing as i did, this is not just an ordinary girl louis this is your dream girl!.

Abby's POV. I just needed him right now and before i knew it i crashed my lips on his, i think this isn't just an crush i like him a lot just go for it Abby!. The kiss was just so lovely that i couldn't help myself from not brushing his face with my thumb, yess he likes it because he's putting his hands on my arse godd that feels good. When he pulled away i saw this amazing look on his face what meant that he liked it as much as i did. ''You wanna go get something to drink before the notice were not there?'' he suddenly said, '' yeah i'd love that very much'' i responded really quick still staring in those beautiful eyes. When we walked or way to the back a raspy voice said'' had fun louis?'' in a mature but sad tone, '' pretty much,yeah'' louis answered at him ,were did he come from and how did louis knew who it was?and why was he sounding so sad?. Then he came in or sight with a doubtful smile like louis said something what hurt him but why we just kissed i'm not his or something or are we?.


Notes

What will happen in chapter 5 between the boys ? and will louis and Abby be a thing or just friends who kissed ?

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I will upload chapter 5 later maby today but if not i will do it tomorrow ;). hope you guys like it so far , and if you have something on your mind just spill it out , i like honesty. xoxo

Comments

update

sweethoneybee10 sweethoneybee10
1/27/14
I'm sorry i didn't update today , i had a little trouble with my family and stuff , maby i'll update a little chapter tonight when i'm in bed or i'll do it tomorrow right after i wake up what will take at around 1 pm because i'm a loonngg sleeper. thanks for reading and the tips xoxo i promise as soon as i can ;)
@onedirection48
sure i'll work on that in my next chapter , thanks for the tip ;)
Could u not have the fint italicized, please? it kind of makes most of it seem like one of their thoughts.
onedirection48 onedirection48
8/19/13
I'm sorry that there are no pictures , but i'm working on it ;b) , i will get it done tomorrow. xoxo