Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)
Chapter 66
Five Minutes Later
Louis' P.O.V
So far the earth plane hasn't been bad. I've meet everyone here and they all shared their sorrowful tale of how they got here. I smile wider as I watch Eleanor push little Kelsey on the swing that hangs from the tree.
I adjust my position curling my legs up to my chest holding them tight with both hands as my back hits the trunk of the tree. God has really done well of planning many things like the earth plane... just alone this feels like heaven yet I wonder what heaven is actually like.
Squinting my eyes I look around seeing the girls talk, write, do cartwheels and such until I look over to see a young girl not too far sitting off in the fields.
Getting up from my spot I dust my hands off walking towards her. Her eyes down looking upon a book she holds. Maybe she's fourteen or so ,but I believe I haven't met her yet.
Slowing down my expression changes as she look up at me with a blank face. \
"Hi, I'm Louis." I say in a normal tone.
"Maria." She says looking up at me, her eyes in slits.
"What's wrong?" I ask her.
"Nothing." She lies.
I smile looking around the yellow plain before licking my bottom lip and softly biting it between my teeth.
"May I sit." I request.
"I don't really care." She says resuming to read what looks like a journal.
Sighing, I sit next to her and study her appearance. She has brown mid length hair with blue eyes and she seems to be fit as well. She must me Maria Orlando... the girl that was raped and murdered, left in a basement.
"Why are you here," she asks looking at me.
"Because you seem lonely," I tell her.
"Well it wouldn't matter what I feel now. I'm dead." She says looking down.
"Hey, just because you are dead does not mean no one cares about you." I reason.
"You don't understand." She says fiddling with her fingers.
"I don't understand what." I question.
"It's all my fault that I am here! I was so stupid!" She yells as she lets a few tears fall.
"Meaning.." I ask for my information.
"I shouldn't have walked home alone at night! I knew it was a bad idea ,but what I do I do? Walk home alone in total darkness and later being followed by some fucking old man that raped and killed me!" She cries loudly as her hands cover her face.
I furrow my eyebrows as I pull in close for a hug.
Kissing her forehead and rocking her side-to-side with me, "Listen...everyone makes mistakes." I coo.
"But not the ones I made." She cries in my chest.
"That is not true." I say.
Maria stops and wipes her tears getting up and looking at me. Her eyes bloodshot with her cheeks red.
"What do you write in there." I ask pointing to the leather book on her lap.
"Everything from the minute I got here till now..." She says flipping through the pages.
"May I see it?" I ask knowing she won't ,but surprisingly I look down at the leather book which is now in my lap.
I open the first page adjusting my eyes to her writing and font size before starting.
January 12th ,2001
Dear Diary,
I'm dead. I'm dead! I can't believe it ,but now I am in this weird place with no one to talk to. I officially hate myself, hate myself so much that I would kill my own self if I were living...too bad I'm dead! Mom is going to be so mad at me and so is dad. I wish I could go back and not attend cheer leading practice. I should have just taken the bus and went home. Little Jojo won't even have a little sister anyone. I hate myself, why can't I just go to hell. I don't deserve to be here. I hate myself. And I absolutely hate my murderer.
Sincerely, The Dead One.
I re-read the entry one more time taking in the words. My eyes look at the date, 2001...that must mean she is nineteen years old now...and still here?
"Louis!" I hear someone call looking up to see Eleanor motioning me to come to her.
I nod, "Give me a minute!" I yell back.
I look to Maria who sighs taking the diary, but I hold onto it.
"Maria, I want you to do me a favor. " I say.
"W-what." She says.
"I want you to forgive yourself and your murderer." I slowly speak.
"What? No! Hell no! Are you mad? I won't. I refuse to forgive such a disgusting person and a stupid person like myself." She says folding her arms.
"Not for the murderer ,but for you. You can't walk around for years on the earth plane carrying around this weight of grief and anger. Forgive for you Maria, do it for you." I say honestly.
"Think about it..." I add, " people will come and go leaving you here. Friends or not," I say.
She nods picking up the book and getting up. I watch as her fingers open the small book ripping a few pages out. Her expression blank she continues ripping page after page, the wind carries the pages along the coast past the trees and beyond as a line of pages looking almost angelic.
Once she is satisfied she flings the book behind her before spreading a smile across her face. I get up and smile at her.
"For me." She says before giggling and rushing over to me, wrapping her arms around me.
I hug her back tightly closing my eyes, it isn't long until we let go.
"Thank you." She says with a smile.
"You are absolutely welcome. " I tell her before looking back at Eleanor who leans against the tree of In Between, " I've got to go now." I tell her.
"Okay. Well will I see you again?" She asks.
I look down at my shoes putting my hands in my pocket..." I hope so. If not, I will be looking for you." I tell her.
She nods and skips before me towards the group of girl. I watch her laugh loudly as the short young girl slowly glow transforming into a older girl. Her hair growing longer and her longs legs skipping towards the tree. Her head turn one more time looking at me. Maria's face extremely different, she gives me a smile stopping. Smiling back Maria Orlando disappears.
"What in the world." I say to myself.
"Louis!" Eleanor calls.
From my dumbfound I run towards my girlfriend before coming to a stop in front of her.
"Come here." She says grabbing my hand.
I blink and all of a sudden we are in a forest like area. I almost gasp as I look up seeing a waterfall.
"Wow." is all I can say.
"I know, but come here." She says leading me towards the rocks.
I bend down as we walk through the falling pounds of water into a area under waterfall itself. The falling water outside acting as a wall is quite a nice view. I study my girlfriend looking up and down at her.
"You look lovely if I hadn't said that." I compliment.
"Thank you baby." She says sitting on a rock face me.
I do the same sitting on a soft rock, I'm sure this is heaven.
Eleanor sighs heavily, "You have to go back." she says.
What? No, "What, no Eleanor I am staying with you." I say.
She shakes her head, "Louis please listen to me you aren't ready to leave the world yet. I love you so much don't get me wrong ,but you have to leave." She reasons.
"Eleanor I am nothing without you. I feel so empty and just lonely. I need you." I say with my voice cracking.
"Please Louis," she grabs my hands holding it in her's, "for me." she finishes.
I look down at her white painted nails before looking into her nice brown eyes. Her expression is so soft and sweet. I missed her so much...I would do anything for her, she knows that.
"O-okay." I say looking into her eyes.
She smiles, "Thank you." Eleanor gets up straddling my lap and puts her soft lips against mine kissing me slowly.
I close my eyes taking in her sweet affection before letting my hands roam her back pulling her close. Once we are satisfied we both pull back staring at each other.
"Louis, if you go back and someone loves you and you love someone else other than me. I want you to move on and start over." She suggests.
"I can't." I reason.
"You can," She scolds, "okay?" she says cupping my face like a baby.
"Okay.." I give in.
I can never replace her. But maybe she is right...it just takes time.
"Why don't you have shoes on?" I ask making her giggling. Her eyes smiles as I watch her head tilt slightly, God she is beautiful.
"Women aren't supposed to wear shoes on the Earth plane...they are not even needed." She informs me.
"Oh...well when will you be ready?" I ask her.
She looks down at her hand, "I don't know Louis. It's only been a couple months I know ,but I just... feel so heavy and I have so much anger towards my murderer that it'll take time until I forgive for myself.." She says getting up.
I watch as she sits across from me with her legs under her. Her white dress flared out covering her legs.
"I'm so sorry." I say feeling like a lift, all of a sudden my body is levitating from my spot upon the ground with my girlfriend, "Eleanor!?" I ask worriedly.
"It's time! You have to go okay. I love you! I always will! " She yells as I get farther apart from her in the are.
"I love you too! Don't forget me, please." I yell back.
"I never will! Don't forget me! " She yells as I rise upper.
"Never in a million years love! But Eleanor who killed you!" I ask yelling.
She pauses ,but speaks "I love you Louis! It'll all be over soon!" She yells.
I look down at my beautiful girlfriend dressed in all white taking in er appearance. All of a sudden everything. Goes. Black.
Louis' P.O.V
So far the earth plane hasn't been bad. I've meet everyone here and they all shared their sorrowful tale of how they got here. I smile wider as I watch Eleanor push little Kelsey on the swing that hangs from the tree.
I adjust my position curling my legs up to my chest holding them tight with both hands as my back hits the trunk of the tree. God has really done well of planning many things like the earth plane... just alone this feels like heaven yet I wonder what heaven is actually like.
Squinting my eyes I look around seeing the girls talk, write, do cartwheels and such until I look over to see a young girl not too far sitting off in the fields.
Getting up from my spot I dust my hands off walking towards her. Her eyes down looking upon a book she holds. Maybe she's fourteen or so ,but I believe I haven't met her yet.
Slowing down my expression changes as she look up at me with a blank face. \
"Hi, I'm Louis." I say in a normal tone.
"Maria." She says looking up at me, her eyes in slits.
"What's wrong?" I ask her.
"Nothing." She lies.
I smile looking around the yellow plain before licking my bottom lip and softly biting it between my teeth.
"May I sit." I request.
"I don't really care." She says resuming to read what looks like a journal.
Sighing, I sit next to her and study her appearance. She has brown mid length hair with blue eyes and she seems to be fit as well. She must me Maria Orlando... the girl that was raped and murdered, left in a basement.
"Why are you here," she asks looking at me.
"Because you seem lonely," I tell her.
"Well it wouldn't matter what I feel now. I'm dead." She says looking down.
"Hey, just because you are dead does not mean no one cares about you." I reason.
"You don't understand." She says fiddling with her fingers.
"I don't understand what." I question.
"It's all my fault that I am here! I was so stupid!" She yells as she lets a few tears fall.
"Meaning.." I ask for my information.
"I shouldn't have walked home alone at night! I knew it was a bad idea ,but what I do I do? Walk home alone in total darkness and later being followed by some fucking old man that raped and killed me!" She cries loudly as her hands cover her face.
I furrow my eyebrows as I pull in close for a hug.
Kissing her forehead and rocking her side-to-side with me, "Listen...everyone makes mistakes." I coo.
"But not the ones I made." She cries in my chest.
"That is not true." I say.
Maria stops and wipes her tears getting up and looking at me. Her eyes bloodshot with her cheeks red.
"What do you write in there." I ask pointing to the leather book on her lap.
"Everything from the minute I got here till now..." She says flipping through the pages.
"May I see it?" I ask knowing she won't ,but surprisingly I look down at the leather book which is now in my lap.
I open the first page adjusting my eyes to her writing and font size before starting.
January 12th ,2001
Dear Diary,
I'm dead. I'm dead! I can't believe it ,but now I am in this weird place with no one to talk to. I officially hate myself, hate myself so much that I would kill my own self if I were living...too bad I'm dead! Mom is going to be so mad at me and so is dad. I wish I could go back and not attend cheer leading practice. I should have just taken the bus and went home. Little Jojo won't even have a little sister anyone. I hate myself, why can't I just go to hell. I don't deserve to be here. I hate myself. And I absolutely hate my murderer.
Sincerely, The Dead One.
I re-read the entry one more time taking in the words. My eyes look at the date, 2001...that must mean she is nineteen years old now...and still here?
"Louis!" I hear someone call looking up to see Eleanor motioning me to come to her.
I nod, "Give me a minute!" I yell back.
I look to Maria who sighs taking the diary, but I hold onto it.
"Maria, I want you to do me a favor. " I say.
"W-what." She says.
"I want you to forgive yourself and your murderer." I slowly speak.
"What? No! Hell no! Are you mad? I won't. I refuse to forgive such a disgusting person and a stupid person like myself." She says folding her arms.
"Not for the murderer ,but for you. You can't walk around for years on the earth plane carrying around this weight of grief and anger. Forgive for you Maria, do it for you." I say honestly.
"Think about it..." I add, " people will come and go leaving you here. Friends or not," I say.
She nods picking up the book and getting up. I watch as her fingers open the small book ripping a few pages out. Her expression blank she continues ripping page after page, the wind carries the pages along the coast past the trees and beyond as a line of pages looking almost angelic.
Once she is satisfied she flings the book behind her before spreading a smile across her face. I get up and smile at her.
"For me." She says before giggling and rushing over to me, wrapping her arms around me.
I hug her back tightly closing my eyes, it isn't long until we let go.
"Thank you." She says with a smile.
"You are absolutely welcome. " I tell her before looking back at Eleanor who leans against the tree of In Between, " I've got to go now." I tell her.
"Okay. Well will I see you again?" She asks.
I look down at my shoes putting my hands in my pocket..." I hope so. If not, I will be looking for you." I tell her.
She nods and skips before me towards the group of girl. I watch her laugh loudly as the short young girl slowly glow transforming into a older girl. Her hair growing longer and her longs legs skipping towards the tree. Her head turn one more time looking at me. Maria's face extremely different, she gives me a smile stopping. Smiling back Maria Orlando disappears.
"What in the world." I say to myself.
"Louis!" Eleanor calls.
From my dumbfound I run towards my girlfriend before coming to a stop in front of her.
"Come here." She says grabbing my hand.
I blink and all of a sudden we are in a forest like area. I almost gasp as I look up seeing a waterfall.
"Wow." is all I can say.
"I know, but come here." She says leading me towards the rocks.
I bend down as we walk through the falling pounds of water into a area under waterfall itself. The falling water outside acting as a wall is quite a nice view. I study my girlfriend looking up and down at her.
"You look lovely if I hadn't said that." I compliment.
"Thank you baby." She says sitting on a rock face me.
I do the same sitting on a soft rock, I'm sure this is heaven.
Eleanor sighs heavily, "You have to go back." she says.
What? No, "What, no Eleanor I am staying with you." I say.
She shakes her head, "Louis please listen to me you aren't ready to leave the world yet. I love you so much don't get me wrong ,but you have to leave." She reasons.
"Eleanor I am nothing without you. I feel so empty and just lonely. I need you." I say with my voice cracking.
"Please Louis," she grabs my hands holding it in her's, "for me." she finishes.
I look down at her white painted nails before looking into her nice brown eyes. Her expression is so soft and sweet. I missed her so much...I would do anything for her, she knows that.
"O-okay." I say looking into her eyes.
She smiles, "Thank you." Eleanor gets up straddling my lap and puts her soft lips against mine kissing me slowly.
I close my eyes taking in her sweet affection before letting my hands roam her back pulling her close. Once we are satisfied we both pull back staring at each other.
"Louis, if you go back and someone loves you and you love someone else other than me. I want you to move on and start over." She suggests.
"I can't." I reason.
"You can," She scolds, "okay?" she says cupping my face like a baby.
"Okay.." I give in.
I can never replace her. But maybe she is right...it just takes time.
"Why don't you have shoes on?" I ask making her giggling. Her eyes smiles as I watch her head tilt slightly, God she is beautiful.
"Women aren't supposed to wear shoes on the Earth plane...they are not even needed." She informs me.
"Oh...well when will you be ready?" I ask her.
She looks down at her hand, "I don't know Louis. It's only been a couple months I know ,but I just... feel so heavy and I have so much anger towards my murderer that it'll take time until I forgive for myself.." She says getting up.
I watch as she sits across from me with her legs under her. Her white dress flared out covering her legs.
"I'm so sorry." I say feeling like a lift, all of a sudden my body is levitating from my spot upon the ground with my girlfriend, "Eleanor!?" I ask worriedly.
"It's time! You have to go okay. I love you! I always will! " She yells as I get farther apart from her in the are.
"I love you too! Don't forget me, please." I yell back.
"I never will! Don't forget me! " She yells as I rise upper.
"Never in a million years love! But Eleanor who killed you!" I ask yelling.
She pauses ,but speaks "I love you Louis! It'll all be over soon!" She yells.
I look down at my beautiful girlfriend dressed in all white taking in er appearance. All of a sudden everything. Goes. Black.
Notes
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