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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 46

After Eleanor's Death, At Starbucks (Present Time)

Chloe's P.O.V

"Okay sorry I'm late. Do you have a list of suspects?" I say sitting down and putting my pro folio beside me.

"Haha, you look like Harry. Anyways no problem. And here are a few" he says handing me a piece of paper.

I shrug off the insult/compliment like reply. Moving over to him.

I look at all the various names

Suspects.

Nelly Hosten

Hannah Sorbe

Alison DiLaurentis

Becka Leenae'

Susan Calder

Danielle Peazer

Evan Clude

Fans

I stare at the last name Calder for a minute and look up at him.

"Who's Susan Calder?" I ask him

"Eleanor's mother..." he says

"Why would she kill her daughter?" I ask in a laughing matter

He makes a face..." I don't know."

I shake it off and go over the list over and over. Okay first I would need to check who's been in New York first before taking any further investigations. I mean you can't be 'suspected' to kill someone when you're not in the same state.

"Thanks, I'll check them out later and get on back to you" I say smiling

"Sounds good. Want anything?" he asks

Cool...he'll get me a drink and I'll let his girlfriend live in peace...sounds cool.

"Um I'll just have a light roat coffee with a lot of sugar and half & half sounds good" I say looking through the list again

"Alright I'll be right back" he says getting up. I watch as he walks in line and turn my attention back to the list. I don't want to scare him and tell him about last night...about the note thing. Maybe is someone writes like the not that's a suspect we'll have a number one suspect.



Later That Night

Chloe's P.O.V

"Alright thank you" I thank the airport administration. I hang up the phone and sigh crossing off Danielle Peazer.

Well I have a few down on suspects which help a little. I look at my list of suspects that are or were actually or recently here in New York during the same time as Eleanor Calder.

Suspects In New York

Harry Styles

Zayn Malik


Becka Leenae'

Alison DiLaurentis

Hannah Sorbe'

Nelly Hosten- Unknown Location at the moment.

At least I have a good start. This is where the detective work comes in and I do interviews. I call my mom letting her know that tomorrow I would be having a 'wipe out' meaning an interviewing that pretty much helps me a lot or not at all. It's all or nothing.

I hear a knock on the door.

"Jimmy Johns." I giggle and open the door paying David and taking my sandwiches.

After eating my sandwich I look at the conditions of the murder.

Okay so she was tortured and badly beaten...she was stabbed and suffocated till she gave up. It sounds like the killer can be either a violent or non violent person.

I look at the pictures of the brutal murder and Eleanor Calder's dead body. Looking closely this person wanted one thing for sure. Revenge.

I then hear a knock on my door.

"Who is it?" I ask

No answer. I get up with my hand on my gun which is loaded in my belt and walk slowly towards the door. I unlock it and yank the door open to see a present on the floor quickly looking down the hallways. Bitch.

I pick up the small box..the kind people put jewelry in. I lock my door once more and sit behind my desk. Opening the box I see a note and a key.

Want more evidence? Go to Loch Lomond Blvd. Brooklyn, New York tomorrow. And only tomorrow. Don't go with back- up, it'll only bring more attention to your appearance since you're not suppose to be there. Your deadline is from 7-8:30 pm tomorrow evening. I'm only trying to help. Here's a key. Xx


My heart pounds withing my chest. Tomorrow's Eleanor's funeral... maybe afterwards I'll go to this place. I Google search the address finding it near the wood of RavensWood County. It's a cabin like place meaning that someone must own the place.

I got through records to see the owner of this cabin and stare at the screen. Mary Anne Susan Bethel. It says she originally lives in California but has a cabin up here in New York. She also died a month before Eleanor which I find odd...she was strangled?

I look back in the papers. They were both strangled. I look up. I may have a double murder case. I guess I should just focus on Eleanor's for now.

I start dialing my suspects phone numbers' of course they all accepted but I don't dare call Mrs. Calder..the pain she must be going through. I shouldn't have the guts to suspect her.

I spin in my chair and clear my thoughts. Tomorrow may change this whole investigation.


Notes

Chloe's outfit-http://img004.lazygirls.info/people/ashley_benson/ashley_benson__instagram_BzqDXJXs.sized.jpg

So, who's red coat & black hoodie?! And who in the hells gave Chloe a key?!

Trailer comin soon tho! Update tomorrow? Nope sowwy. Update and trailer on Thursday Thrustday!...For Harry Styles AYE!

....Did you laugh?....Nelly get's it

Comments

@Sameria
Yea

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.