Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)
Chapter 45
At Eleanor, Nelly & Hannah's Flat
Eleanor's P.O.V
We stand in front of our apartment door staring at it... I look at the girls and they nod in permission for me to open it. I don't know what to expect...weather Nelly's waiting to stab us on the other side of the door...or if she's really dead and someone dragged her body away...or if she's watching right. Now.
"Come on Eleanor, just open it" Hannah breathes holding her stomach.
She claims she's been feeling cramps every since we started running. I sigh and unlock the door and walk into our flat. The breeze blow roughly causing chills to run down my spine. Alison and Hannah walk in behind me. I walk through the kitchen and it looks pretty normal, same with the living room.
"El...." I hear Hannah call from Nelly's room
I rush for Nelly's room to see the door wide open and the curtains flowing wildly due to the violent fall breeze. I look up at the wide open window and sigh looking down at the horrible messy room. Her bed is messy, papers, clothes, shoes all over the floor.
I make my way towards her dresser opening and closing the drawers, "She's gone." I whisper
Hannah is bent down looking at the pieces of paper that are on the floor whilst Alison is doing the same.
"Yep, the bitch is red coat. She planned out all the shit look" Alison hands me a piece of paper
Watch Louis and Eleanor, cut breaks and witness the accident. Attack her during the shopping spree....
My eyes flood with tears, "How could she?" I cry
Alison makes her way and hugs me, "It's okay...everything will be alright. Maybe you should go to the police?"
Hannah walks over and hugs me also, "...If she returns." she finishes.
I wipe my tears, "I love you guys" I gush. And I really do at least I have two good friends on my side.
Ali looks at her watch and up at me, "Well...I gotta go. I have another shift at WetSeal." she sighs picking up her bags.
"You work at WetSeal?!" I ask her surprised.
She nods, "Yeah only in the evening. I'll visit you sometime are Aero'."
I give her one last hug and she gives a small wave to Hannah who's in pain and walks out with her bags in her hand.
As soon as I hear the door close I look around at the empty room. Pictures gone, clothes, accessories and posters all gone. She really cleared out.
Hannah gets up and rushes to the bathroom. I sigh and follow her.
"You need something?" I ask her referring to medications.
She shakes her head and pukes out her system. I pat her back and walk back into Nelly's room.
I can't believe she's red coat. Out of all suspects why would it be her? I look around the room still in a bit shock. Just then my phone vibrates, I unlock the screen.
New Text Message from A Blocked Caller.
Unknown: Meet me outside.
I stare at my screen...who is this? And why should I meet them outside?
Me: Who is this.
I guess I should go..maybe it's important. I look back at the bathroom door at Hannah, I might as well need an excuse. So I make my way to get the full garbage and clean up half of Nelly's mess. This bitch better be thankful.
Unknown: It's safe don't worry. Please Hurry...
I quickly put my phone in my back pocket and tie up the trash bag, "Han, Imma go throw the trash out. I'll be right back!" I call
Safety first. I decide I'm not taking any chances and grab a kitchen knife from my hiding spot. The top left cabinet in the back past the jelly beans. I put the blade in my back pocket careful on not to commit suicide myself.
"Okay!" I hear her faintly yell. I close the apartment and walk down the long hall and stairs.
I open the door to the back of the apartment and throw the trash over in the dumpster. Where the hell is this person? I look around before hearing.
"Eleanor...." I look around to see where who's calling me name.
Just then I see Nelly walking over to me. My eyes widen..Fuck! I look at her up and down scared. She's wearing a pink and grey track suite with the same red lipstick except no blonde wig or red fucking coat.
I back up afraid of what she'll do to me.
"Please..listen to me. I don't have much time." She says looking around...as if someone is watching her.
"Why should I listen to you Nelly. Look what you've done."I snap looking at her. I'm still taller than...red coat.
She looks at me up and down and grabs me in a hug. For some odd reason I hug her back.
She ends the hug and takes a breath, "El, I'm not red coat." she admits
"What?" I ask her. She obviously did act the part back there.
"I'm not red coat....please believe me." she begs
I try to get the fact out of my head, "Okay but then why aren't you dead?!
Lemme just remind you that she dropped like ten feet down on her back and was bleeding...or was she?
"I'm obviously not." She says dancing the disco. I giggle, " I ran after you guys turned around..and boy I shouldn't ha-" she stops in her sentence and checks her phone and looks around.
"I-I gotta go." she says
She can't just leave me like this! "Wait! Nelly." I stop her.
"What?"
"Tell me more about...this red coat. Please." I beg her
"All I know is that it's a girl and she's the one in charge. She's always watching....always." She whispers.
"But why would you pretend that your her?!" I ask even though I knows she's gotta go.
Chills run down my spine. Who can do such a thing
"I gotta go now." She says
"Wait Nel..."
Nelly stops in her tracks, "Will I ever see you again?"
"I don't know Eli..." she rushes over and grabs me into a hug. I grab onto her and hug her hand until my boobs ache. Closing my eyes and letting a tear fall. I love Nelly.
We let go and mouth 'I love you's' and I watch her disappear into the bushes behind the dumpster. There she goes. There go Nelly Hosten....my best friend.
If red coat is still here then who is red coat? And I have a sick feeling that she's watching right now. I walk back in the apartment and open the door to the flat to see Hannah sleeping in the couch in the living room. I make my way to my room and close my door slowly and locking it.
I sigh. Red coat...where ever she is...I hope I find out who it is.
Eleanor's P.O.V
We stand in front of our apartment door staring at it... I look at the girls and they nod in permission for me to open it. I don't know what to expect...weather Nelly's waiting to stab us on the other side of the door...or if she's really dead and someone dragged her body away...or if she's watching right. Now.
"Come on Eleanor, just open it" Hannah breathes holding her stomach.
She claims she's been feeling cramps every since we started running. I sigh and unlock the door and walk into our flat. The breeze blow roughly causing chills to run down my spine. Alison and Hannah walk in behind me. I walk through the kitchen and it looks pretty normal, same with the living room.
"El...." I hear Hannah call from Nelly's room
I rush for Nelly's room to see the door wide open and the curtains flowing wildly due to the violent fall breeze. I look up at the wide open window and sigh looking down at the horrible messy room. Her bed is messy, papers, clothes, shoes all over the floor.
I make my way towards her dresser opening and closing the drawers, "She's gone." I whisper
Hannah is bent down looking at the pieces of paper that are on the floor whilst Alison is doing the same.
"Yep, the bitch is red coat. She planned out all the shit look" Alison hands me a piece of paper
Watch Louis and Eleanor, cut breaks and witness the accident. Attack her during the shopping spree....
My eyes flood with tears, "How could she?" I cry
Alison makes her way and hugs me, "It's okay...everything will be alright. Maybe you should go to the police?"
Hannah walks over and hugs me also, "...If she returns." she finishes.
I wipe my tears, "I love you guys" I gush. And I really do at least I have two good friends on my side.
Ali looks at her watch and up at me, "Well...I gotta go. I have another shift at WetSeal." she sighs picking up her bags.
"You work at WetSeal?!" I ask her surprised.
She nods, "Yeah only in the evening. I'll visit you sometime are Aero'."
I give her one last hug and she gives a small wave to Hannah who's in pain and walks out with her bags in her hand.
As soon as I hear the door close I look around at the empty room. Pictures gone, clothes, accessories and posters all gone. She really cleared out.
Hannah gets up and rushes to the bathroom. I sigh and follow her.
"You need something?" I ask her referring to medications.
She shakes her head and pukes out her system. I pat her back and walk back into Nelly's room.
I can't believe she's red coat. Out of all suspects why would it be her? I look around the room still in a bit shock. Just then my phone vibrates, I unlock the screen.
New Text Message from A Blocked Caller.
Unknown: Meet me outside.
I stare at my screen...who is this? And why should I meet them outside?
Me: Who is this.
I guess I should go..maybe it's important. I look back at the bathroom door at Hannah, I might as well need an excuse. So I make my way to get the full garbage and clean up half of Nelly's mess. This bitch better be thankful.
Unknown: It's safe don't worry. Please Hurry...
I quickly put my phone in my back pocket and tie up the trash bag, "Han, Imma go throw the trash out. I'll be right back!" I call
Safety first. I decide I'm not taking any chances and grab a kitchen knife from my hiding spot. The top left cabinet in the back past the jelly beans. I put the blade in my back pocket careful on not to commit suicide myself.
"Okay!" I hear her faintly yell. I close the apartment and walk down the long hall and stairs.
I open the door to the back of the apartment and throw the trash over in the dumpster. Where the hell is this person? I look around before hearing.
"Eleanor...." I look around to see where who's calling me name.
Just then I see Nelly walking over to me. My eyes widen..Fuck! I look at her up and down scared. She's wearing a pink and grey track suite with the same red lipstick except no blonde wig or red fucking coat.
I back up afraid of what she'll do to me.
"Please..listen to me. I don't have much time." She says looking around...as if someone is watching her.
"Why should I listen to you Nelly. Look what you've done."I snap looking at her. I'm still taller than...red coat.
She looks at me up and down and grabs me in a hug. For some odd reason I hug her back.
She ends the hug and takes a breath, "El, I'm not red coat." she admits
"What?" I ask her. She obviously did act the part back there.
"I'm not red coat....please believe me." she begs
I try to get the fact out of my head, "Okay but then why aren't you dead?!
Lemme just remind you that she dropped like ten feet down on her back and was bleeding...or was she?
"I'm obviously not." She says dancing the disco. I giggle, " I ran after you guys turned around..and boy I shouldn't ha-" she stops in her sentence and checks her phone and looks around.
"I-I gotta go." she says
She can't just leave me like this! "Wait! Nelly." I stop her.
"What?"
"Tell me more about...this red coat. Please." I beg her
"All I know is that it's a girl and she's the one in charge. She's always watching....always." She whispers.
"But why would you pretend that your her?!" I ask even though I knows she's gotta go.
Chills run down my spine. Who can do such a thing
"I gotta go now." She says
"Wait Nel..."
Nelly stops in her tracks, "Will I ever see you again?"
"I don't know Eli..." she rushes over and grabs me into a hug. I grab onto her and hug her hand until my boobs ache. Closing my eyes and letting a tear fall. I love Nelly.
We let go and mouth 'I love you's' and I watch her disappear into the bushes behind the dumpster. There she goes. There go Nelly Hosten....my best friend.
If red coat is still here then who is red coat? And I have a sick feeling that she's watching right now. I walk back in the apartment and open the door to the flat to see Hannah sleeping in the couch in the living room. I make my way to my room and close my door slowly and locking it.
I sigh. Red coat...where ever she is...I hope I find out who it is.
Notes
Nelly's outfit-https://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-R6pd_zJrX0E/AAAAAAAAAAI/AAAAAAAAAAA/85flEYHBBb0/s500-c-k/photo.jpgNelly "All I know is that...."-http://25.media.tumblr.com/6a79c4ad40fec74749c6790bfcbb3dc7/tumblr_mhtf2xE1nJ1rmhhn6o1_500.gif
Nelly at the apartment like building-http://24.media.tumblr.com/1eba01e97cf46aa0db47489f52ebd397/tumblr_ms8chdtxoe1s7l90ho1_500.gif
Nelly at the scene-http://i1.ytimg.com/vi/A_ScN5zE43Q/maxresdefault.jpg
Hangin on-http://images6.fanpop.com/image/photos/35400000/cece-drake-pretty-little-liars-tv-show-35420683-250-141.gif
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Okay, no more gifs (You)-http://www.teen.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/one-direction-thank-you-harry-styles-louis-tomlinson-niall-horan.gif
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3/21/15