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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 40

At The Amusement Park

Eleanor's P.O.V

I rush over to the three of them, they all look at me like some sort of alien. Evan breathing hard staring at my boyfriend. Louis on the other hand is tense with his hands in fists.

"What the hell is going on?!" I say looking at the both of them

"This fucker thinks he's a better boyfriend than me!" Louis says glaring at Evan who put his chin up. He seriously needs to grow the fuck up.

"Tell you dumb ass boyfriend to stop being a dick" Becka snapped rolling her eyes and chewing her gum.

"Shut the hell up as for you slut." I defend my long time boyfriend , Evan then takes a step closer to me a little too close.

"Don't. Fucking. Talk. To. My. Girlfriend. Like. That." he spat. I glared up at him.

Louis pushes him off causing him to finally back the shit away from me.

"Aye, don't fucking touch her you dick" Louis said

Evan looks back at Louis and at me with a smirk, "Like this." he then slaps me hard, my cheek turning bright red feeling the sting and burn of the hard slap. It was so forceful that my entire body stumbled to the side dropping one of the chocolate covered fat.

Louis wasted no time grabbing Evan's shirt shoving him backwards and slapping a punch on his jaw mans times with anger.

"Damn stop!" Becka screamed holding her phone in one hand and her purse in the other.

"Louis it's fine stop!" I might not like the fact that Evan slapped me but still I don't want Louis getting involved with...a...um...psycho? Yeah psycho.

Louis throws Evan on the ground on his back, his nose starting to bleed leaving his white muscles shirt in stains. I gasp at the scene. Louis without hesitation got on top of him beating the shit out of my ex with punches in every angle. Evan trying to defend himself with his arms covering his face. Louis didn't even look anywhere else just beating and beating him. Then Louis did something unbelievable...something I've only seen in the movies. With his head Louis knocked his forehead against Evan's full hard speed causing Evan to compeletly lay on the ground knocked out cold.

"You bastard!" Becka yelled running over holding Evan's head in her lap.

"Louis that's enough!" I yelled walking closer holding his shoulders, he got up and kicked Evan in the stomach one last time. I noticed that his phone fell so I quickly picked it up putting it in my pocket. We walked in the direction of the parking lot holding hands.

"Are you alright babe?"

He nodded, "Yeah I'm great" he smiles looking at me and kissing my forehead, I blush. I never knew that he could be such a protector of me before..physically.

"Wanna go home?"

"Yeah, thanks for today" I say beaming hot inside

"Anything for you love"

We reached our cars and let go of hands, I noticed that his hands where bruises and bloody.

"You should wash up.." I suggested

He looked at me weird, "What.."

"You're hands.." he looked down and nodded

"Be right back" he said rushing to the restroom. I then feel a vibration in my pocket taking Louis' phone out I froze at the screen.

-New Text Message from HannahBannana-

I stared at the black and white print, my heart skipping a beat. He's still texting...her.

Notes

The book is almost over :( Sowwy but at least you know she's gonna die soon)

Comments

@Sameria
Yea

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.