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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 34

In The Dark Elevator

Eleanor's P.O.V

I stood there with my hands in fists breathing hard. Red coat came at me once more punching me in the mouth making me bite down on my lip so hard that my bottom lip started to bleed.
"You bitch" I spat trying to add fuel to the fire hoping he/she'd talk back.
I whipped my lip and tried to grab red coat's hair but grabbed his/her's shirt pulling him/her towards me and kicking them in the stomach. I think he or she wore a hoodie because the hood was up. I continued kicking with anger. One kick, for being creepy. Another kick for the car accident. And one last kick for making me and Louis' relationship awkward on our dates. Red coat or black hoodie yelped in pain. I still couldn't tell if it was a boy or a girl.
Red coat grabbed my neck but I quickly punched her/him in the stomach and made my way towards the exit of the elevator leaning against the door still terrified. He/she grabbed my necklace and broke it off, I heard it clink to the floor.
"You fucking bastard!" I snapped. Red coat must have been pissed because before I knew it, he/she'd grabbed my hair and rammed me once more into the walls of the elevator on his/her's knee,one after another. My forehead began to ache and my nose bled even more. I tried to get her/his hands off of my hair, it was a large hand...very strong, I can even feel it's veins bulging through.
"Stop!" I whined, with that red coat drawn me back and threw me across the elevator, my body hit the wall of the elevator making me slump in the corner. I heard footsteps and a door close. About two seconds later the lights came back on. I sat there in the corner weak and beaten. I finally got up and made my way to grab my purse and beanie putting it back on my head. I opened my purse and took out my mirror looking at myself. My bottom lip was swollen, nose bleeding but thankfully no serious bruises, only one small one on my forehead that blended in with my hair.
I licked the blood from my bottom lip and got tissues out of my purse whipping my bloody nose which had almost dried.
"Yuck" I whispered to myself. Once I looked...almost decent I pressed floor one to head back to work. This time the elevator actually worked I looked over at the necklace Mary gave me and picked it up, I sighed. Already broken within ten minutes of having it, maybe she could fix it. I walked out looking at the people who were walking around, talking and such. That made me wonder, how the hell does red coat have access to the elevator controls? I started rushing to Mary's cart hoping she would be able to fix my broken necklace and remember.

-Flashback-
I then felt a vibration in my back pocket and took out my phone. -New Text Message from NelNel-'Meet me in the elevator, I've got major news to tell you!'. I replied saying sure and rushed to the elevator. It took about two minutes before the doors opened, it was empty and I got in holding my purse. I looked around, Nelly was no where in sight.
-Flashback Ends-

Eleanor's P.O.V

Nelly was the one that told me to go to the elevator.Nelly has a red coat. Nelly knows how to fight...who did I fight back there? Was it Nelly, Nelly Hosten. My supposed to be best friend. My heart started to beat fast. I continued walking and saw Mary with her eyes studying the fine jewelry on her cart. She looked almost worried and continusly looked around as if someone was watching her.

Notes

Hey my little 'Red Coats' I'm really excited today because it's Liam Payne's 20th Birthday! Yay! Anyways I was just wondering if you guys could vote me to become a 10.0 again...not forcing you but only if you like it. Eleanor will die in a couple chapters but please be patient.
Who do you think is red coat? Who do you think is black hoodie? Are they the same person?! Update later :)

Necklace (Eleanor has the pink one)-http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m9g19rmLgK1qif3hoo1_500.jpg

Eleanor's Fall-http://31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m5ab9qGrDB1qeee3yo1_500.gif
Black hoodie-http://static.wetpaint.me/pll/ROOT/photos/a-953002148351367522.jpg

Comments

@Sameria
Yea

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.