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Revenge On Eleanor Calder (Coming back this Winter)

Chapter 29

At The Bonfire

Eleanor's P.O.V

I sat next to Harry chatting with him about what we should do for Liam's surprise birthday party. His green/blue orbs never left my face, making it major awkward.
"Erm...how about a Hawaiian theme" he said looking at the huge bonfire that sat next to us.
"Too common..." I answered him, and it's true too many people use the Hawaiian theme for birthdays and parties.
"You're right...Disco!" Harry yelled he quickly quieted down when Liam and the rest of the boys looked over, I laughed.
'Sorry' he mouthed to me
"It's alright...um...Disney theme" Light bulb! You've done it again El!
"You've done it again El...good job" Harry said giving me a high five and smirking.
"Thanks...we should dress up as characters" I added
"Yeah I'll be...Tinker Bell and Louis can be Peter Pan"
"I'll be Tarzan" Harry said beating on his chest I laughed and heard Hannah laugh loudly, I looked over to see her sitting beside Louis on the red couch we'd brought out laughing with Louis. I watched as they laughed and when she finally caught her breath Hannah layed her right hand on his shoulder and whispered something in his ear. Louis whispered something back and they both laughed again.
"You okay El"?" Harry asked looked back, trying to see what I was looking at, I can feel my face getting red.
"Yeah" I covered smiling, he smiled back and got up
"I'm gonna get a banana want one?" he asked walking towards the bus
"No thanks.." I said my focus still on Louis and Hannah. She's not doing it. She's not doing that shit that she did to Zayn and Perrie to me and Louis. No. Fuck Eleanor what do I do now... I got up and went to Niall and Nelly and sat next to Nelly. She smiled.
"Hey" she said
"Yeah, hey El" Niall said playing his guitar.
"Just checking in on you guys" actually I was ditched by Harry Styles and my boyfriend is being flirted by my supposed to be best friend but still, just checking on you is a great cover up. I looked over at Louis and Hannah who was talking low tone and looking into each others eyes. My heart skipped a beat. I can feel my face getting hot once again. That's it. I walked past Nelly and Niall, rushed past the bonfire which swayed in the direction I walked in and stood in front of my best friend and boyfriend who looked up at me.
"Louis, can I talk to you" I said calmly
He looked confused and looked at Hannah who shrugged and got up. I reached for his hand but felt nothing, nothing at all. I guess he didn't see it. I continued walking in front of Louis until we were behind the bus on the other side where some paparazzi were above us but still,it was quite.
"What's with you and Hannah?" I asked him still trying to stay calm here.
"Just chattin, what's with you?" he asked back looking around, his eyes never looked into mine. What's with him....
"Nothing, just curious, I came here to spend time with you Louis"
"We will, just give me some freedom relax Eleanor"
"What do you two text about"
He looked almost shocked, what's the matter, Louis Tomlinson never been questioned before.
"Just about what we're doing and other stuff why does it matter Eleanor"
"Because you seem into her and she seems into you"
"What no, why would you fucking think that has the beer went to your brains?" he said loudly, he finally focused on, he glared at me annoyed
"Okay, fine I'm sorry okay."
"Whatever"
"Louis I just care about you and it looked like...."
"Looked like what"
"Like you really liked" I said quitely
"You think I was checking your friend out didn't you...geeze Eleanor how low do you fucking think I am?!" the time his voice frightened me, I jumped a little and stood there under him, totally vulnerable, I've never seen him like this.
"I just fucking though Louis! Okay I'm sorry! I didn't know! It looked like you were!"
Louis got closer making me back towards the bus until my back was against it.
"You know what..don't fucking talk to me, if you wanna be that way. Then be that way" Louis walked off leaving me standing there. We never fought like this before. I can feel the tears coming, here they come. I blinked with that my tears rolled down my cheeks. I said I was sorry... I decided I couldn't stay here forever and walked back to the other side of the bus. I saw Perrie walk in with another girl beside her. She had brown hair and a tan complexion, I walked over to greet Perrie. I couldn't see Louis in sight now Hannah. I whipped my tears before reaching over to Perrie and the girl. My heart beated fast. Hannah's probably having fun with Louis... I sighed.
"Hey Perrie!" I said excitingly with my fakest smile
"Hey girl! What's up"
"Nothing just haha chilling"
"Eleanor this is Sophia Smith, Liam's new girlfriend..." I observed her closely, she's okay. I mean who am I to judge but all I see is boobs.
"Hi, I'm Eleanor nice to meet you" I said shaking her hand
"Hey Eleanor, I've heard lots about you" she said back
"Nice things I hope..." I gave her a wink.
"Hey hey well isn't it Perrie Ed-ed-Edwards" I heard Louis' light British voice call from behind me, Hannah walked beside him.
"LouBear!" Perrie said singly walking towards the guy I just argued with. Sophia stood next to me and smiled but was brought over to Louis by Perrie to meet my boyfriend and 'best' friend. Hannah and Sophia shook hands and Louis glanced at me just a little. Not a glare just a non expression glance. Once his eyes flew off of me and back to Sophia he smiled and continued talking to her. Here we go again. My heart felt so heavy, why didn't he come over to see if I'm okay. Normally he does after these kind of fights, I don't want to lose Louis, I love him I can't. The tears started coming again and I looked for the nearest exit. Which was the bus. Forget Hannah and her sluttiness, wearing short-shorts for people to see her fuckin ovaries. I opened the door and walked in to find it empty. Everyone must be enjoying their time I guess. I whipped my tears and sat in the mini living room where Louis and I once sat happily enjoying each others' company. I sat there for a while until something caught my eye. The closet was a little open and there it was. A velvet red coat. My heart beated fast. Was red-coat here? Oh shit El...what'd I get myself into.

Notes

What?! Just?! Happened?!-http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=94831283
What Hannah and Nelly wore-http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=94832880

Comments

@Sameria
Yea

@Bipolar
Really!? Aw ilsym :) Thank you!

OK ok look

I personally think that instead of publishing that piece of shit 'after' they should publish this (maybe with different characters)

Next chapter more drama? Wow. This chapter was drama filled. I can't imagine what's next.