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Philophobia

Chapter Nine

We were still sitting on the sofa quietly, no words have been exchanged since we were settled. I could literally feel myself glaring straight through his soul, waiting for him to speak.

It was now dark, and this place reminded me of a horror movie I once saw with Hunter.. Hunter.. She probably doesn't even notice I'm gone.

I kept asking myself why I didn't just leave, he has no control over me. But something about him gave me the creeps, telling me to listen or else there would be consequences. Of course, never would I admit that to myself or anyone. Sometimes, I truly believed fear really was for the weak.

"Are you going to keep staring at me, or would you just like a photo?" Harry cocked, breaking me from thought.

I gave a small scoff, shaking my head and glancing in another direction to hide the blush slowly appearing on my cheeks. Why was I blushing? I'll never know.

"Why am I here?" I asked, changing the subject.

"Why don't you answer that yourself." He quickly chirped back.

"I'd love to, but I would have left before dark, where as you kept me here." I muttered, glancing back to see him smirking.

"So stubborn," I heard him mumble under his breath.

Pretending like I hadn't heard, I glanced around the dark night filled room. Not much to look at while in the dark.. Doesn't help that I'm practically night blind, also.

The blanket Harry had tossed earlier was allowing the breeze of freezing air rush to every visible piece of skin along my body, if I were to wrap myself any tighter, I'd cut off circulation. I pondered on the thought for a while, before thinking I was likely just going insane if that was what I was willing to take to get myself out of here.

"I can keep you warm you know," Harry offered.

I watched him, not knowing whether or not he was serious. But no sign of joke played along his face.

He was serious..

My reply was a simple head shake, not exactly sure on what to reply with.

"Why?"

"Why what?" I snapped.

He seemed unfazed by my sudden harsh tone, but a small smirk threatened to appear on his lips.

"Why do you act tuff, when really, you're breaking down inside?"

When I processed what he'd asked, I was confused. Why would he think that?

"Why would you think that?" I asked, speaking my thoughts.

He just shook his head, like he knew.

"You're obvious, but yet hard to read." He commented.

"I'm not a book," I muttered. In return, making him give a low chuckle.

"It's a metaphor, love."

"I got that, thanks."

"You don't need to get upset, love. I'm just -" "Just what?" I asked, cutting him off. He looked like a deer and head lights.

"You're making me stay here, for God knows what. And now, you're trying to act as if you actually cared, or knows me. I'm sorry, Harry, but I'm not playing your games. This isn't the movies. So please, stop."

Eventually, once I calmed down, he spoke up. Quietly, and soft. Like he was careful of his words.

"I'm sorry you feel that way, but I just can't risk anyone finding me right now. You can leave in the morning."

When he finished, I actually felt bad for blowing up like I had. He was just trying to be polite..

Both of us turned to our sides, laying down while my feet ended up tangled with his. Sending waves of heat through me. I was quietly thankful for that.

Notes

I know. Sh-i-tt-a-y chapter, sorry.

But uhh, thanks for the comments guys, but I would appreciate more than "update." Or whatever, but thanks goes to your thoughts for trying :)

I'm tired, it's my bed time, because here in Canada it is............. 11:03. Yes, I stayed up writing this haha!

Please, VOTE ; COMMENT ; SUBSCRIBE <3
Have a good day at school/work tomorrow everyone :) :*
P.s, 2,000 views?! Eeeeeeeep :D hehe.
-C

Comments

Please update

Carissa Carissa
3/24/14

Please update!

Carrotlover Carrotlover
3/16/14

Well that's what make your story even more interesting: in your notes, you just put all your thoughts on there, and it's really, but really cool and interesting!
Hey, being dork is not only negative. It's someone who can be themselves and doesn't care if people judge. Seriously, your ''dorkiness'' isn't a bad thing! :)
I hope for you that one of your ambition will come true. If you take the path of writing, well I'm telling, plus all your readers: you can make it.
Even though this is a fic, I don't feel like it's one. I feel like I'm reading a book, but on the internet. I'm not feeling it's Harry Styles from One Direction (Well, I think you never wrote Styles, so maybe I'm wrong thinking it's Harry Styles, but ANYWAY.). I feel it's just another character from your head. My point is: your story could be found on a shelf at the library store. So, if you finished your story (not that I'm septic, no no! I know you can finish it! :) ), I suggested you to send it to a publishing house! :D
I'm glad to know I made you smile :) Don't give up on your writing and delete everything. See how much people love your work? See how much we enjoy reading it? Don't worry, you have a beautiful writing. Yeah... I get frustrated me too when I wrote my story. I'm a french Canadian, and it's sometimes tricky to express, for example, a situation or an emotion in english. But this site helps me, so I'll continue :)
Have a gooooood morning/afternoon/evening/night or whatever time it is where you live xD

marie.eve07 marie.eve07
1/9/14

@marie.eve07
I read your comment, and couldn't stop smiling! Personally, I write on this site as practice. My future ambition being between writing and visual arts. Though, I'm glad you like my story! So many times I've thought about deleting this, and just quitting. But I don't want to do that to my readers! I have never found a love for my own writing, so I just get frustrated after awhile.
Plus, when you commented on my notes, I literally just read back through all of them and realized how big of a dork I sound!!! Hahaha

Canadianeeh Canadianeeh
1/8/14

I really love your work. The choice of words, the main plot, how you express everything... It''s just, wow! I felt like it was really happening, that Jamie, Hunter and Harry were really living (okay, we all know Harry is living on this Earth for real but you know what I mean. Well, I hope xD anyway) keep up writing. If writing wasn't in your choice of career, think about twice; I'm not just saying this to be sweet with you. No, I believe you're an exquisite writer and your imagination will never stop growing. You'll go far in life with only a pen and paper.
I really love reading your notes too. They're twisted up with wisdom words and hilarious sentences!
Okay... This comment is pretty long, maybe I should've sent it in messages.... Hahahaha xD

marie.eve07 marie.eve07
1/8/14