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Philophobia

Chapter Seven

After locking myself in my room for a few hours to avoid Hunter, I left for a drive when I knew it was safe to say she wasn't going to bother me.

It was nice to listen to the radio, just to get my mind off of things. Thanks to the help of my favourite bands, that is.

So focused on loosing myself in my mind and the road, I forgot the percentage of gas left in the car, and when I heard the thumping I knew I was about to halt. Quickly, I pulled to the side of the road, more than pissed off with myself.

my fists slamming against the wheel, I pushed out from my seat.

I'm only on the outskirts of town.. My phone, of course at home, and the nearest gas station isn't for a couple miles. Great, I thought to myself.

Time for a breather..


It had to of been well over an hour, just wondering. Not exactly caring where I left my car or how to get back, just wondering.

Side roads turned into dirt roads, dirt roads turned into side roads, side roads turned into trails, and the trails soon turned into a long narrow driveway.

I was in awe by the time I reached the finish of the never ending driveway. The abandoned old victorian styled home had it's fair share of shattered glass and slowly escaping shingles on the roof, but somehow still managed to contain most of it's earlier days of beauty.

Curiosity is what grabbed the best of me, making me enter the once was a home.

I had to admit; it was creepy. The years of collected dust and dirt, broken lamps and what looked like a sofa brought in only a while ago.. Someone lived here?

Continuing to investigate, I searched. The kitchen's pumps surprisingly working with little pressure, and the death looking stove still attached to the peeling wall papered wall.

I wasn't willing to flick a switch for light, not nearly that curious. Luckily the natural light from outside shone through the windows, allowing me to get a glimpse of everything in each room.

A wide staircase centred in the middle of the wall in the, what looks to be the living room. It almost looked palace like, with the help of the old fireplace.

What caught me off guard was the fresh ashes and few left over logs inside of it. Someone was here...

Immediately, the creaking in the house became far more creepy, with the feeling of being watched. I felt my insides burn with my heart rate increasing each second passing. I needed to get out of here, now.

My feet rushed me to the front door, trying to pry it open. After a few jolts and shakes, it clicked open and swung open with the increasing wind outside.

I kept my eyes on my feet, scared to look up. All too soon to realize I had hit my head and fallen to my butt. "Ow!" I gasped in surprise.

"What the hell are you doing here?" The familiar voice raged.

I glanced towards the voice, not expecting it to the least. Thinking I had hid a wall.

His emerald orbs burned into mine, scaring the life out of me. His frame tall and tough, not fazed by my shove at all.

"I - I don't know.."

Notes

I'd like to give huge thanks to; @katieeeee , she's the amazing creator of my new cover photo for this fan fiction! And I'm in complete awe with it, 'cause it's perfect!


Check out her book guys, you won't regret it. I've been following along since the start.

"The Ending," she's a terrific writer! I'm jealous, honestly. No doubt in my mind says you's won't enjoy it either! <3

I'm gonna update tomorrow too.. If I get the chance !!!!! I owe you's some updates.
Spoiler: Next chapter is mostly of JAMIE AND HARRY!! Yeah!!!! Now I can finally get into the juicy stuff, glad I got all that sappy junk over with.

The story is starting to come together, don't worry guys.. It get's more and more intense each chapter, I promise. I know the chapters are short right now, but I need you's be patient because school, homework. It's an important year for me, so I need really good grades.

Please.. Vote, comment... SOMETHING! I'm dying to know what you's think, and I never hear from you's ._. I don't even know if you's read this. But.. I need you's to.

VOTE;COMMENT;SUBSCRIBE - P A L E A S E <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Do you guys like music in intense scenes?.... Curious. Answer in the comments!<3 :D

Comments

Please update

Carissa Carissa
3/24/14

Please update!

Carrotlover Carrotlover
3/16/14

Well that's what make your story even more interesting: in your notes, you just put all your thoughts on there, and it's really, but really cool and interesting!
Hey, being dork is not only negative. It's someone who can be themselves and doesn't care if people judge. Seriously, your ''dorkiness'' isn't a bad thing! :)
I hope for you that one of your ambition will come true. If you take the path of writing, well I'm telling, plus all your readers: you can make it.
Even though this is a fic, I don't feel like it's one. I feel like I'm reading a book, but on the internet. I'm not feeling it's Harry Styles from One Direction (Well, I think you never wrote Styles, so maybe I'm wrong thinking it's Harry Styles, but ANYWAY.). I feel it's just another character from your head. My point is: your story could be found on a shelf at the library store. So, if you finished your story (not that I'm septic, no no! I know you can finish it! :) ), I suggested you to send it to a publishing house! :D
I'm glad to know I made you smile :) Don't give up on your writing and delete everything. See how much people love your work? See how much we enjoy reading it? Don't worry, you have a beautiful writing. Yeah... I get frustrated me too when I wrote my story. I'm a french Canadian, and it's sometimes tricky to express, for example, a situation or an emotion in english. But this site helps me, so I'll continue :)
Have a gooooood morning/afternoon/evening/night or whatever time it is where you live xD

marie.eve07 marie.eve07
1/9/14

@marie.eve07
I read your comment, and couldn't stop smiling! Personally, I write on this site as practice. My future ambition being between writing and visual arts. Though, I'm glad you like my story! So many times I've thought about deleting this, and just quitting. But I don't want to do that to my readers! I have never found a love for my own writing, so I just get frustrated after awhile.
Plus, when you commented on my notes, I literally just read back through all of them and realized how big of a dork I sound!!! Hahaha

Canadianeeh Canadianeeh
1/8/14

I really love your work. The choice of words, the main plot, how you express everything... It''s just, wow! I felt like it was really happening, that Jamie, Hunter and Harry were really living (okay, we all know Harry is living on this Earth for real but you know what I mean. Well, I hope xD anyway) keep up writing. If writing wasn't in your choice of career, think about twice; I'm not just saying this to be sweet with you. No, I believe you're an exquisite writer and your imagination will never stop growing. You'll go far in life with only a pen and paper.
I really love reading your notes too. They're twisted up with wisdom words and hilarious sentences!
Okay... This comment is pretty long, maybe I should've sent it in messages.... Hahahaha xD

marie.eve07 marie.eve07
1/8/14