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Philophobia

Chapter Five

I forced a few dry blinks, trying to convince myself that what I'm witnessing wasn't true. But the same picture appeared each time my eyes opened.

"Jamie," Hunter heavily breathed, taking me from my thoughts.

My eyes met her worried ones, while Harry stepped back from her presence with ease. His actions definitely not going unnoticed.

"You," I mimicked from Harry's and I's earlier conversation.

His feet seized from movement, due to my harsh tone. He watched me quietly, expecting me to burst into flames any second.

"Jamie, I can explain!" Hunter pleaded, a distraction from my anger.

Mine and Harry's eye contact remained, as I studied his familiar features with the help of new light. His chocolate curls now knotted and messily placed around his head to the thanks of Hunter's fingers. The familiar emerald green in his eyes from our first encounter were lighter, but blank of emotion. The cocky smirked replaced with a line of disappointment.

"Good night," my words surprising them and myself with my increasingly calm state.

Before Hunter or Harry could speak again, I marched down the hall to my room, making sure to slam the door shut behind me.

Slowly approaching my bed, I sat on the end. Ducking my head into my hands to try and be able to think clearly.

I remember how wrong I thought I was for blaming this boy, Harry, for the problems I was having recently with Hunter. But now realizing how right I actually was to do so.

How many sides does this boy have? I'll never know.

He had a gift of driving woman crazy with just his touch, to turn them. Hunter is a prime example, and within the little time of a week.

Being to wrapped up in my thoughts to hear my door open and someone approach me cautiously.

"I'm sorry," they slurred softly.

Not bothering to look up, because I knew who it was. But I wasn't going to start an argument.

"Good night," I repeated for the second time that night.

Their defeated sigh, and the door clicking shut told me they left. Thankful, really. I wasn't jealous or hurt to see them together, just disappointed to see what they've done to each other in such short time.




I woke up to the rain harshly battering against my window. The clouds outside hiding the sun, giving the effect of night.

I had to force myself out of bed this morning, remembering my commitments to keep the house clean. I wasn't one to sulk over something either. But I wasn't prepared for the several empty beer bottles placed throughout the living area.

How didn't I notice them before? I should have known they were intoxicated, just like every other night lately.

Finishing the never ending recycling, and cleaning the counters of the kitchen, I noticed the note taped to the fridge.

Gone for a bit, don't wait up.
-Hunter


Of course she's out, I thought to myself. But why leave a note? Because I caught her dry humping a known stranger in my living room? Probably.

But she didn't know that, no, she won't even give me the time of day anymore.

Huffing to myself, I sat down on the island's stool.

I think it was time to visit Andy.. He'll listen.

Notes

HELLO GUYS! I updated, indeed. I finished right at 11:00 too ;) , but I had to write this note.. so bummer :\

Anyways, it's just a filler, but ..
SPOILER: You'll learn a lot about the main character Jamie next chapta ;)

Questions:
Who's Andy?
and
Who do you think was saying sorry to Jamie?

THOUGHTS :D

Comment;Rate;Subscribe, love you guys!! <33

Comments

Please update

Carissa Carissa
3/24/14

Please update!

Carrotlover Carrotlover
3/16/14

Well that's what make your story even more interesting: in your notes, you just put all your thoughts on there, and it's really, but really cool and interesting!
Hey, being dork is not only negative. It's someone who can be themselves and doesn't care if people judge. Seriously, your ''dorkiness'' isn't a bad thing! :)
I hope for you that one of your ambition will come true. If you take the path of writing, well I'm telling, plus all your readers: you can make it.
Even though this is a fic, I don't feel like it's one. I feel like I'm reading a book, but on the internet. I'm not feeling it's Harry Styles from One Direction (Well, I think you never wrote Styles, so maybe I'm wrong thinking it's Harry Styles, but ANYWAY.). I feel it's just another character from your head. My point is: your story could be found on a shelf at the library store. So, if you finished your story (not that I'm septic, no no! I know you can finish it! :) ), I suggested you to send it to a publishing house! :D
I'm glad to know I made you smile :) Don't give up on your writing and delete everything. See how much people love your work? See how much we enjoy reading it? Don't worry, you have a beautiful writing. Yeah... I get frustrated me too when I wrote my story. I'm a french Canadian, and it's sometimes tricky to express, for example, a situation or an emotion in english. But this site helps me, so I'll continue :)
Have a gooooood morning/afternoon/evening/night or whatever time it is where you live xD

marie.eve07 marie.eve07
1/9/14

@marie.eve07
I read your comment, and couldn't stop smiling! Personally, I write on this site as practice. My future ambition being between writing and visual arts. Though, I'm glad you like my story! So many times I've thought about deleting this, and just quitting. But I don't want to do that to my readers! I have never found a love for my own writing, so I just get frustrated after awhile.
Plus, when you commented on my notes, I literally just read back through all of them and realized how big of a dork I sound!!! Hahaha

Canadianeeh Canadianeeh
1/8/14

I really love your work. The choice of words, the main plot, how you express everything... It''s just, wow! I felt like it was really happening, that Jamie, Hunter and Harry were really living (okay, we all know Harry is living on this Earth for real but you know what I mean. Well, I hope xD anyway) keep up writing. If writing wasn't in your choice of career, think about twice; I'm not just saying this to be sweet with you. No, I believe you're an exquisite writer and your imagination will never stop growing. You'll go far in life with only a pen and paper.
I really love reading your notes too. They're twisted up with wisdom words and hilarious sentences!
Okay... This comment is pretty long, maybe I should've sent it in messages.... Hahahaha xD

marie.eve07 marie.eve07
1/8/14