When We Met
Cautious
Mia's P.O.V
(Next Day)
emma wakes me up. " get up its emergency shopping day" she says. i get up " why?" i ask. " because we want some clothes so lets go shopping" she says. i hop in the shower. when i get out i change into my clothes
when i finish i go downstairs. my mom sees my outfit " where are you going dress like that?" she asks " shopping" i say. " change it" she says " mom im only going shopping and coming back" i say. she frowns and goes to her room. emma comes down looking like she already went shopping. "http://www.polyvore.com/emmas_outfit/set?.embedder=8136491&.svc=copypaste&id=94081798">
(Next Day)
emma wakes me up. " get up its emergency shopping day" she says. i get up " why?" i ask. " because we want some clothes so lets go shopping" she says. i hop in the shower. when i get out i change into my clothes
when i finish i go downstairs. my mom sees my outfit " where are you going dress like that?" she asks " shopping" i say. " change it" she says " mom im only going shopping and coming back" i say. she frowns and goes to her room. emma comes down looking like she already went shopping. "http://www.polyvore.com/emmas_outfit/set?.embedder=8136491&.svc=copypaste&id=94081798">
Ok so love the story but try using less texting talk and more story grammar your a great wrighter and i think you got a verry special talent
3/9/14