Niall kissed Jacky good night and shut the door. He tip toed into the kitchen and sat down. He waited for the others to hurry up and get down here. They were planning a surprise birthday party for Jacky. She was turning twenty three. Niall was too excited. Harry was the first to show up. He had brought paper so they can write down ideas. Liam was the next one. He brought Dwayne with him so that hey could get better ideas for the party. Then Zayn came and he had brought nothing. Then Louis came with pens. Once everyone was sat down and ready, they started talking about ideas.

They talked for a straight three hours. When they were done, it was five in the morning. They had seven full sheets of ideas. They all stayed up and talked for the rest of the morning. They didn't make coffee till it was late enough. They didn't want Jacky to wake up yet. Dwayne said good bye and he left. When they were ready, they went up stairs and got dressed.

Niall was wearing a silk green formal shirt, black formal pants, a black formal jacket, dark green shiny dress shoes, and a black tie. He was so ready.

Harry was wearing a black tux with green stitching. He wore a green tie and dark green dress shoes. He was ready to have fun.

Louis was wearing a navy blue silk formal shirt, black formal pants, a black formal jacket, navy blue shiny dress shoes, and a bright blue tie. He was ready as well.

Zayn wore a normal formal tux, like Harry, but with blue stitching instead. He had dark blue shiny dress shoes on and a bright blue tie. He felt awesome.

Liam was wearing a red silk formal shirt and black formal pants with a black formal jacket. He had on red shiny dress shoes on and a bright red tie on. He felt cool. Earlier that day Niall had bought Jacky a bunch of new sexy dresses for her to wear. He hoped that she loved them. They heard foot steps coming and the room got quiet.

She came down wearing a tight, dark red, strapless, dress that went down to her mide thigh. She wore her black heels and a black mini jacket. She was wearing red eyeshadow, sparkly red eyeliner, and red mascara. Her lips looked magical with her dark red lipstick on them. She smiled as she came down.

"So, Niall, where are we going that we have to be so dressed up for? And why are we going? I don't want to do anything today!" She complained to Naill. He didn't answer her. He just led her to the limo that was waiting for them outside. In the limo, they were all silent. No one spoke. The drive was only fifteen minutes but to Jacky, it felt like five hours.

When they got to the ballroom, Jacky's eyes went wide. The building was huge. As Niall led her in, while the guys got the presents from the trunk, she looked at everything. Once they got to the main room, she spun all over the place and couldn't help but to let out a little laugh. She smiled at Niall. He led her to another room. It was pitch black and looked empty. She gave him a confused look. He smiled and turned on the lights.

It happened all at once, everyone saying 'happy birthday', everyone crowding her to get a hug, being surrounded by people she didn't know. Feeling like a stranger. She looked to Niall for help but he wasn't there. She loved the party. As she said hi to people, she looked for someone else. As she was walking, she bumped into a young girl who had a piece of watermelon in her hand. She quickly apologized and kept walking. She was looking at a interesting painting when someone grabbed her arm and dragged her to a chair in the middle of the stage. She looked around, confused at what's going on. Suddenly. Niall, Harry, Liam, Zayn, and Louis walked onto the stage, making Jacky giggle.

"This is a song for the birthday girl. She is amazing and sweet." Liam said. He turned around and smiled at her. She smiled back. They started to sing their number one song. "What Makes You Beautiful". She couldn't help it and started singing along with them. They started the laugh and put the mic towards her mouth. When the song was over, it was speech time. A lot of people had speeches to say. Not everyone got to speak but many did. When speeches were over, it was time for another song. Jacky got to pick this one and she got to sing along with them.

She chose the song "Lazy Song". Everyone loved it and had a great time. She kept laughing and giggling during the whole party. When it came to presents time, the boys carried a huge table full of gifts. They put it next to her and she grabbed the first one. It was from her father. She opened the card and laughed when she read it. When she opened the gift, she jumped up and down, screaming in joy. Her father had bought her three One Direction concert tickets. And they were front row. She was so happy. She sat back down and grabbed another present.

This one was from Harry and Liam. She read the card and smiled. When she opened the bag, she was speechless. They had bought her the purse she wanted really badly. She dropped the bag and ran up and hugged them. She said thank you and sat back down. The next one was from Niall. She read the card and pulled out a twenty dollar bill. She smiled and opened the gift. He had bought her a new phone. He had got her a new iPhone. She hugged him and gave him a big kiss. The next gift was from Zayn and Louis. She read the card and laughed at the joke Louis put. She opened the bag and saw what looked like a million things. She pulled them out one at a time. They had bought her perfumes and their One Direction scent. She walked over and gave them a big hug.

The next one was from her best friend, Abby. She looked around the room and in the crowd for Abby, and noticed her by the chocolate fountain talking to someone. Jacky looked closer and saw that it was her mother. She was very happy now. As she read the card, her eyes filled with tears. She laughed when she finished reading it. When she unwrapped the gift, she almost screamed too loud. Abby had bought her ten iPhone cases and they all had One Direction stuff on them. She ran over and hugged her, scaring the crap out of her. She let the tears fall. She didn't care if anyone saw. She walked back up to the stage and sat back down.

The other gifts were from people she didn't know. She got a ton of things that she has always wanted. When there was only three gifts on the table, they called a break and decided that we needed some cake. They led Jacky to a giant red cake. Her face was printed onto it. She laughed when she saw it. Niall handed her a sharp knife and held her hand. They cut the cake at the same time and cheers went up everywhere. Jacky had a piece and said that the cake tasted like heaven. There was dancing and music during the break.

After the break, they went back to the gifts. She opened one that said that is was from someone named "Random Person". She looked around the room, confused. She read the card and laughed at what it said. When she unwrapped that gift, she saw and knew who it was from. She had gotten a blender that had Niall's face on the bowl. She looked at her dad and smiled. The next one said the same thing. She read the card and opened the gift. It was a box full of guitar strings. She looked at it confused. She decided to open the last gift before she figured out what that is for. The last one was from a random person as well. It was a really tall gift. When she unwrapped it fully, she had tears rolling down her cheeks. Someone had bought her a guitar. She looked around and her eyes stopped at Niall. She ran up to him and gave him the biggest hug ever.

At the end of the party, the boys had to stay late and clean all the trash up. There wasn't much so it got done quickly. When they got into the limo, they all looked at Jacky. She had the biggest smile on her face. She still had tears rolling down her cheeks. During the ride home, they got her phone all hooked up and ready to use by tomorrow. She was so amazed. Nothing like this had ever happened to her before.


When they got home, everyone was so tired out, they all just changed into pajamas and went to bed. Jacky was the happiest person in the world that day.

Notes

Tell me how it is please. Sorry if it's too long.