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Niall's Charm

It's between Life and Death Part 1

Niall walked up to Jacky in his bedroom to see if she needed anything. She was still fast asleep. He looked at her one more time and left the room. He shut the door and went back down stairs. He looked at Dwayne and frowned.

"She is still asleep." Niall said. He sat down and drew three cards. Dwayne looked at him and then back at his cards.
"Did you wake her up so you can see if she has a fever?" He asked. Niall looked at him like he just lost his favorite pet turtle. Suddenly, Niall heard his signal and ran upstairs. He walked into the room and saw Jacky sitting up and ringing her bell to get his attention. He walked over to her side.

"Do you need anything?" He asked. She nodded and tried to answer but everything just came out as squeaks. He looked confused. She tried again and the same thing happened. He didn't want to ruin her voice, so he gave her a note pad and a pen. "Write down what you need." She wrote fast.


I need some food and water. My mouth tastes like acid and I hate it. Thank you. <3


He nodded and kissed her on her forehead. He walked out of the room and down the stairs. When he walked into the kitchen, everyone looked at him. He looked back at them and gave them a concerned look.

"She can't talk now. Can you please help me figure out what's going on?" Niall's voice shook. Harry and Abby ran up to Niall and hugged him. They comforted him while he feltdepressed. Dwayne got up and walked to the stairs. He walked up and went to check on Jacky. She was sitting up and drawing on the note pad when he walked in. She looked up and saw him. Her eyes went wide and she smiled.

"Can you talk at all?" He asked. When she shook her head now, his heart dropped a little. He didn't wait to talk to anyone. He took her and led her to the car. She kept her phone on her and made sure her dad didn't see. Dwayne was taking her to the hospital. When they got there, she got a room right away. When the doctor came in, he mostly talked to Dwayne and if she took any meds. The room started to spin, to Jacky, and she tried to say something but she couldn't. It was only a couple of minutes, when her whole world went black.

Good thing she was already in the hospital.



Comments

@Sage Fire
Ok, but do you want me to change it?
Harryluver6969 Harryluver6969
8/21/13
@Harryluver6969

I didn't mean anything by it I was just figuring that u didn't know don't worry a lot of people don't I didn't until I looked closely at one of his piccs
Sage Fire Sage Fire
8/21/13
@Sage Fire
Ok, um, thanks. Is it bothering you so much that you want me to change it or can I leave it the way it is?
Harryluver6969 Harryluver6969
8/14/13
his eyes arnt hazel they're green
Sage Fire Sage Fire
8/14/13
Yay!
Harryluver6969 Harryluver6969
7/15/13