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surviving the bite

chapter 82

Louis p.o.v
Harry went off to find Rachel to tell her that Liam was in transition and he went to get some blood for him as I watched his skin became colder and his skin became paler, his muscles became bigger and his face more defined, his heart was almost at the point of stopping and I can’t help but think why I did this I know he wanted it but why did he want to become a monster like us?

“Hey Lou are you ok?” Rachel asked sitting next to me.

“I’m fine just thinking I can’t believe I did this” I said.

“it’s funny to think that it seems like a life time ago since you went through the same right?” she smiled.

“the day my life got turned upside down from then on everything changed some good others bad” I said.

“the goods?” she asked.

“I don’t have to sleep meaning I get extra time to relax especially on tour, I never get tired, I’m stronger, faster and my senses are better meaning I can avoid crowd and getting mobbed, I’ve become even closer with the boys and I’ve seen the world in a different perspective.” I said.

“so a lot of good things, but –“

“but there are always the bad things like keeping it under control yes it’s easier but it’s still hard, my senses they pick up everything making it hard to concentrate at interviews or when answering twitter questions, my best friends got dragged into this mess leading to two well three vampires, one half demon, one werewolf, one that we thought was dead all the hiding at the beginning and basically in a few years we’re going to have to basically disappear just so we don’t expose vampires meaning we’re going to fake our deaths or something devastating our families and meaning we will never see them again.” I sighed.

“but then again I’ll still have my four best mates well make that 9 including my girlfriend.” I smiled.

“so when are you changing El?” she asked.

“ um she says she that she wants to do it a few months after Liam and Ally so they get used to it and we don’t have to worry about her and them just so it’s easier.” I said.

“his hearts stopped” Rachel said.

“yeah he’ll wake up soon” I said.

“I heard his heart stop, he hasn’t woke up has he?” Harry asked walking in.

“not yet but soon” I said.

“So Harry what’s happening with Emma?” Rachel asked.

“she doesn’t know what she want’s she’s mainly scared about what she will be like and if she will change but she wants to do it for me but I’ve told her not to rush I’m giving her as long as she wants and she’s thinking about it loads” Harry said.

“ I think she’ll come around maybe it’s past events that have put her off you know like the whole demon thing and then there was the thing that happened with me and my humanity being turned off maybe she’s worried that something like that will happen” I said.

“maybe” he said Liam started to stir but he shot up and started to breath heavily.

“Liam calm down you don’t need to breath and your forcing your lungs to work so calm down” I said he started to calm down and look around.

“are you thirsty?” Harry asked.

“my throat burns” he said.

“yeah you need some blood it will calm it” I said and Harry passed him a blood bag which he drank quickly.

“better?” I asked and he nodded.

“ok well Louis I think you can handle helping Liam out so your going to teach him the ropes” Rachel said patting my back and leaving.

“So Li how do you feel?” Harry asked.

“different” He said he looked up and his eyes were still bright red.

“Liam try to stop thinking about blood and concentrate on blocking the smell of blood out ok?” I said.

“ok” he whispered and he shut his eyes and in his face you could see he was concentrating, his eyes opened and they were their natural brown.

“ good your eyes are normal” I smiled.

“so they were red before?” he questioned.

“yeah don’t worry though I think your going to be fine with controlling your thirst” I said.

“ want to test your new speed?” harry questioned.

“he hasn’t even took one step yet never mind running” I said.

“come on Lou make this fun” Harry said.

“hey I’m in charge so get your butt out of here and do something productive like baking” I laughed.

“what’s the point no one really eats food I mean theirs only the El and Emma since Ally is under transition as well” Harry said.

“Well treet them now go” I commanded and he walked out.

“ok Li your gonna have to try to take it slow because there is a possibility your going to move really fast ok?” I said and he nodded he stood up and took a few steps moving at a completely normal speed.

“ ok now be careful picking stuff up because you will underestimate your strength” I said he picked up a mug and it smashed into pieces.

“oops” Liam said.

“it’s fine just takes some time” I smiled.

“ok come on we’ve done the basics now do you want to try your speed out?” I said and he nodded I jumped out of the window landing on my feet.

“whoa” Liam said.

“come on then jump” I said and he jumped landing on his feet wobbling slightly.

“there you go Li you’re a natural your going to have no problems” I said.

“ok but how do I run?” he asked.

“just run” I said and he ran running at vampire speed but he soon stopped but tumbled to the ground.

“ok yeah stopping is harder than running you just have to shift your balance it will help grabbing a tree or something when you stop next just to help you balance” I said helping him up.

“this is amazing everything is so clear and I can hear for miles and I can smell a lot of things” he said amused.

“yeah It’s great Li now come on race you to the river?” I said and his eyes turned red and he nodded and we both sped off into the forest.


hey guys ok i just wanted to say that this book is coming to an end there might be 2 or 3 chapters left i'm not sure but i do know i'm ending it shortly i'm not sure if i will carry on another book or if i will just leave it the way it is what do you guys think?

@Emmaaaaa :)


@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3