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surviving the bite

chapter 34

Louis p.o.v
“you better not use that against any of us, I mean it was annoying when we thought Niall was dead, if you use that against me I will kill you.” Liam said.
“what do you mean when you thought I was dead?” Niall asked.
“none of us knew what to do when you were going through the transition and we were distant and upset, Louis here dealt with your death through pranks so what he did was with his newly discovered ability he would just make a force field in front of us and we would walk into it forcing us to the floor.” Liam said.
“makes sense, only Lou would get a cool power which he can use to prank people.” Niall said.
“I guess your right I think these abilities reflect your personality, I mean Rachel is a great Listener and she is great to go to for advise and she understands what’s going on so maybe that’s why she is able to read minds since she is a understanding person and that she is a great listener and i am a very funny person and I love to play pranks and joke around and I got the power of force fields” I said I looked over at Harry who was still lying on the ground “guys Harry isn’t getting up” we all ran over to Harry and he looked dead.
“Harry, Harry come one Harry wake up” Rachel said.
“guys I don’t think he’s dead he might have passed out I mean look at the wall it almost crumbled as he hit it, Lou did you do anything different this time.” Liam said.
“not that I can think of “ I said.
“you didn’t feel different?” Rachel asked.
“not that I can think of maybe it was the adrenalin from fighting Harry” I said shrugging my shoulders.
“or maybe you can control the force or your force field, like how much power you put into it, Louis you could have a very powerful gift here.” Rachel said.
“well this is awesome.” I said looking at my hands.
“why are you looking at your hands?” Niall said.
“because that’s where it comes from.” I said.
“it doesn’t you can just radiate it off your body you just control the ball force fields from your hands.” Rachel said.
“well that’s just awesome I have a cool little bubble.” I said everyone laughed.
“you have always lived In your own bubble.” Liam said.
“well all of us live in a bubble a supernatural bubble, and us 5 live in another bubble I mean no one sees the full of what we do.” I said.
“wait don’t we have a show today and Harry is passes out.” Zayn said.
“if Paul walks in just say he got really drunk last night and he passed out.” I said,

After 2 hours of sitting around Harry shot up gasping for air.
“Calm down Harry, you passed out it’s fine.” Rachel said rubbing his back and he lay back on the floor.
“that’s the last time I trust you Lou.” Harry said.
“I didn’t mean to do that, Rachel says I can control how much power I put into it.” I said.
“great” Harry said sarcastically.
“don’t worry I’m not allowed you use it on any of you well according to Mr serious over here.” I said pointing to Liam.
Harry’s p.o.v
I went flying into a wall by Louis and everything went black, I opened my eyes to find myself in a huge black room, I have never been in this room, the last thing I remember was flying into a wall and passing out wait so am I unconscious.
“yes you are” someone said, I looked around seeing nothing even with my vampire sight I still can’t see anything this room must truly be empty, but why am I in here?
“you know Harry, it’s so easy to get inside your head” the person said again.
“who are you?” I asked.
“I’m your worst nightmare.” He said I looked around and saw a pair of red eyes beaming at me I got in a defensive position and stared at him not backing down, I knew my eyes were red as I felt my fang being released from my gum.
“I can beat you no problem.” I said trying to sound confident, he laughed.
“you beat me you will never see me coming, you and you friends made the biggest mistake killing me.” He said.
“wait, no it can’t be we staked you I saw you turn to stone and we burned you.” I said.
“Harry, Harry, Harry you really think a vampire older than two hundred years old will be defeated that easily, you killed my body my mind is still alive, I can be anyone at any time you will never see me coming” he said I was constantly looking around and I turned to my left and the two eyes were back he stepped forward and ripped my heart out I fell to the floor, but my eyes flew open and I shot up gasping for air and I clenched my chest.
“Calm down Harry, you passed out it’s fine.” Rachel said rubbing his back and he lay back on the floor.
“that’s the last time I trust you Lou.” I said.
“I didn’t mean to do that, Rachel says I can control how much power I put into it.” Louis said.
“great” I said sarcastically.
“don’t worry I’m not allowed you use it on any of you well according to Mr serious over here.” Louis said pointing to Liam.
“ok your power is not important at the moment, when I passed out I was in like this black room right and the vampire was talking to me and just before I woke up he pulled my heart out of my chest.” I said.
“Harry that was your mind just playing tricks we killed him and burned him.” Rachel said
“no we killed his body his mind is still alive, and he can jump into other peoples bodies he said we will never see him coming, guys he could be anywhere planning to kill us.” I said.
“Harry that can’t be true nothing like this has ever happened in the history of vampires.” Rachel said.
“I don’t have a good feeling about this though I mean the pain felt real in my chest and it sounded like him and it looked like him he threatened us and he said that killing him was the biggest mistake we could have done, I defiantly think he’s going to be after us, I mean vampires, werewolves, witches and sorcerers are real him recanting himself seems all too real.” I said.
“keep an eye out then. If someone attacks you, do not kill them capture them until he Is gone or something happens, he will most likely keep a low profile and we won’t see him, but keep a look out, especially you Liam, carry some weapon and just be extra careful, he could attack at your concert tonight.” Rachel said. we all looked at each other everyone had worry in their eyes but everyone kept a brave face on.


thanks @J.J for the idea with Harry i know it isn't exactly the same, but i hope you enjoy this chapter :)and i acutally made time to update today, today was my first day back at school it was shit apart from i had art but i hate school and i hate everyone in my classes :( i don't know when the next update will be in a few weeks i will try to figure out a better updating schedule it's just with school and i'm moving soon i'm having trouble thinking straight and i found out i have my first exam on november the 5th great :/


@Harry's kitty kat
Thats what i have named it and i have posted the first chapter i would update but im at school unfortantly haha

I think immortal life sounds really good!! <3

@Harry's kitty kat
aw i'm happy i'm making another one it's fun writing i've always had a passion for writing i suspose and aw i'm glad it is your favourite fanfic i literally looked back at the begining of the first story and i can tell that it's improved like my writing was shit at the beginning haha i still don't know what to call the next one i have an idea and it's immortal life but i'm not sure any ideas? <3

Ahahaha I'm so glad you're making another story and yes, your really good!!! This is my favourite fanfic <3