In The Heat of Los Angeles - Comments, page 7

@xXFluffy_GruXx
Thank you so much! I needed to hear that today. I've been struggling to get through the next chapter despite knowing what I want to happen. I'm torn between which of the two sides of Harry I want to show more of. And I'm worried that whichever way I go won't be right. It's the first time I've ever written Harry in this sort of manner. And while it's so fun the challenge is well a challenge. Haha. But I appreciate it a lot that you think it was beautifully written. :)

@raybansncoffee
So much DID happen, but you wrote it beautifully.

@xXFluffy_GruXx
I'm glad you liked it! It was a super long chapter and I was hoping that people enjoyed it. So much happened. :)

This is amazing. :)

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
I hope you managed to get some sleep. I know I just took some stuff that my doctors give me to help sleep and prevent migraines. Hopefully it works. I've slept 2 hours since yesterday morning. I don't miss balancing work and school though I have two jobs so I know the feeling of being busy. I like busy so I've been writing in basically every free moment lately. Between this and London Calling getting finished it's been a lot of writing. A LOT. Haha! And thank you on your feedback on chapter 3 and your kind words. I'm a little nervous for Everlee too. Sleeping with a potential client is perhaps not the best idea ever. Hopefully she recovers well. I'm already starting on chapter 4 this story seems to be flowing from me. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter soon so we can see what E does next!

Just read chapter 3 and it's amazing. I can't wait to see what happens. I'm nervous about what is going to happen next though since she probably should have been professional and not have slept with a potential client... eeek. Can't wait! And yes. Sign of the Times is amazing!! Love love love it.

@raybansncoffee
I've honestly listened to his single so much already it's unhealthy... I'm in college and decided that it would be wise to stay up until 2am to hear it first on the radio (it was worth it) but now I have to wake up at 4am and work all day until 6pm it's going to be a long day! But I can't wait to continue reading this! You're an amazing writer and I know it's hard trying to balance a busy schedule!

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
Thank you so much! The chapters ended up that long because I got 20+ pages in, hadn't introduced a main character (Harry) and had no idea where to break chapters. But my hope is that each will be long. The last several chapters I've written in ficus have been like 5000-6000+ words which is ideal for me. I as a reader HATE chapters that are little and leave you wanting more. I'm already working on chapter 3 and hope to have more of it done over the next few days between my work stuff and well freaking out over Harry's first solo track.

I just finished chapter 2 and it's so great. I love how long the chapters are because it feels never ending and you go into such detail that keeps me hooked throughout the whole thing, I can't wait to see where this story goes... you're an amazing writer!

@xXFluffy_GruXx
I would agree with that. College is MUCH better than high school. For a number of reasons. Life after college well that's a completely different story. I'm glad your prof was awesome and gave an extension and that is a pretty HUGE extension. :)

@raybansncoffee
Update: my professor felt bad because she never explained the project before spring break, so it isn't due until the 20th... which is why college is better than high school. XD

@YouLoveWhoYouLove
Thank you! I wrote the final chapter of my other fic last night so I should be able to start on chapter three soon!!

This is amazing!!

@xXFluffy_GruXx
Sorry to keep you from your project! I know how important those are...though I don't miss them at all. :) Hopefully you get your work done and thank you for your kind words. I'm having a lot of fun with this story and can't wait to work on the next chapter!

This is so good! I need to be doing a project for college, but I found your story and instantly fell in love with it!!