The Assistant - Comments

@Kath85

THANK YOU! I'm glad you liked it! <3

Yes yes yeeeees!!! Great epilouge! All the love

this was a good chapter. Usually when there's like one of those chapters where you see a different side of the male crc it's too overboard and too farfetched, but with this it was simple and stuck to its roots. LOVE LOVE LOVE

I THINK YOU UPDATED MY THREE FAVORITE STORIES AND I'M SO HAPPY ALSO I LOVE WHEN THE GUYS LIKE "YO I'M TRYING TO BE GOOD HERE YOU DON'T BELIEVE I WANT TO FUCK YOU THINK AGAIN"

Please update soon :)

AAAAAAAHHHH so much happened!!!!! I hope Nora gets over herself tbh grow a pair girl. Update soon!! Also don't forget He's Not Worth It. I love that one too

Please update!!

lol about baby harry + love the Daddy Direction throwback.....tbt

I like this chapter a lot good work

@lisavslisa
THANK GOODNESS!! I'm so disheartened by great starts and bad endings!! KEEP IT UP

@hotforharry

Thank you thank you thank you! You're so kind to write such a looong review. Thank you for the pointers. Fortunately, I won't get writer's block with this story, because I've got it completely written already. 24 chapters and an epilogue to be exact. I try to make all my stories different and fun and exciting, so whereas it's a story line that's been done and done and then done again, I hope I've put enough of my own mark on it to be unpredictable and original. Again, THANK YOU SO MUCH! - Lisa

okay so only because you asked for it I'm giving you a review. Mind you I am in no way an author and my words should be taken lighter than hydrogen. But this is a really good story. It does follow a common Harry Styles/One Direction storyline, yet that doesn't phase me and frankly we live in a day and age where taking great things and putting a personal spin on them is a norm. So in that sense, I'm really excited to see where you take this story. But it is also my biggest fear where you take this story because, in reality, you don't have to take it anywhere. That is the big issue of the following-a-mold method, which it seems to me like your doing (universe knows before couple that they are meant to be together, yet each of their individual actions prepares them for the moment they recognize that they are perfect for each other), to believe that you are doing something different than your favorite story only because your characters have different names. So my advice to you would be to decide where this story is going now, so when you run into writer's block later on, you're not tempted to fall into the archetypal storyline. Feel free to message me cuz it's late when I'm writing this and idk how much makes sense, but THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND I LOVE IT KEEP GOING!!!!!

@lolastyles10101

Thank you!!!

I love it