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LOVE THIS YOU TWO!!!!
@LukeLover2317
@XMuKeKeTcHuPX

@XMuKeKeTcHuPX
You're not a horrible person! Of course I forgive you, I totally get that life happens! Haha if you're still up for co-writing this story I totally am!

@LukeLover2317
Wow I am such a horrible person. I left you for so long. I wouldn't blame you if you wanted to just carry on by yourself because I am so irresponsible. It will not happen again. I will be a lot more active. If you will still have me, ido love to help. I'm so sorry for ignoring your message. I'm so busy at school preparing for huge exams. I hope you'll forgive me :(

@XMuKeKeTcHuPX
Oh gosh, that's totally understandable! sorry to hear that everything broke! Are you able to get one now, and are you still game to keep going with this story?

@LukeLover2317
OMG omg hello! I'm so so sorry! My phone broke and so did my laptop! I'm sure a bad author abandoning all my stories. And I didn't tell you I was leaving! I'm so so sorry :(

@LukeLover2317
No problem. As much as I want the book to be updated quickly, I also don't won't the book to change for the worse. <3

@Ana Hemmings
That's good advice, thank you :)

@LukeLover2317
If I was you, I'd slowly update so that you're not changing the book to much. Try to contact them or anyone they know to figure out whats going on. Thats all I can really cay. :) <3

@Ana Hemmings
Thank you! My co-author has been MIA for a while...and I feel a little bad continuing by myself because she is the one that created...should I keep going with it?

I love this book so much. Please update soon. <3

@CALM CUTIE
Thank you so much! Me and LukeLover2317 will be updating more frequently now so hope you enjoy xx

love it!!!

@LukeLover2317
Sure that sounds awesome! I'll add you as an author :)

@XMuKeKeTcHuPX
Yeah, co-authoring would be fun! I really like writing the climatic, dramatic parts, and I usually write those right away and then go work away from the climax. If you're interested, I could write the climatic part and send you a message, and we could go back and forth with ideas :)

@LukeLover2317
You just saved my life literally. I was thinking where this story should go and whether to delete it or not but you have virtually given me this story. If you are interested in becoming a second author that would be helpful! But if not you will get all the credit I can give you. Thanks for helping. I appreciate it so much xxx

Hey! First I want to say that I'm sorry this post is so long but to sum it all up, this story is really good, it has a great starting and great foundation and has the potential to go so many awesome places! Second I wanted to thank you so much for the kind words on my story "The Assistant" and I think this was the story you were talking about...? Anyway, I'm going to give you my input if you are interested!

(Also I'd love to answer your question of the chapter but that's another really long story and idk if anyone really wants to read another rant of mine :P)

Okay, I thought of a really cool place you could take this story, but feel free to disregard if you don't like. I won't be offended.

You could continue by writing about Hope and Michael hanging out. Michael could be like a really immature straight boy that thinks he's so smooth and so clever but really comes off shallow. He could make comments like "you have really nice boobs" or "I'd love to grab your ass sometime" and even though those remarks are sort of offensive, Hope could really enjoy the comments since no boy has ever said things like that to her before. It makes her feel attractive. That night, Michael could kiss her and she could really, really like it. But she's confused because she doesn't really want to date him, because she knows he's a player.

Then, they could hang out a couple more times, and kiss a little more. Then, Michael could officially ask her out, and she says yes. She's a little afraid that he's going to cheat, but decides to trust him until he gives her a reason not to. And ultimately, Michael never does cheat on her.

However, not all will be good. Michael could decided to go to parties instead of hanging out with Hope, and that makes her upset. Then, Michael decided to take Hope to a party, and she's excited because she has never been invited to a party before, and she's even more excited when Michael puts his arm around her and shows her off as his girlfriend. (There could even be a little side drama where a girl who hooked up with Michael at a party gets angry and tries to fight Hope, but Michael and his friends, enter Luke/Ashton/Calum, defend Hope.)

But Michael gets really drunk at these parties, and that upsets Hope because it reminds her of her drunk father. Hope will ultimately tell Michael it's alcohol or her, and Michael will choose her and promises to give up drinking.

And here's the climax/ending: I like to go for a really big, dramatic climax/ending, and I also like to do some IRL crossover. You could have 5SOS starting to get popular, and then one day Michael tells Hope that they are going to be touring with One Direction. Hope is devastated, and Michael debates whether or not to go, but decides to leave Hope to go on tour. It could end with Michael kissing Hope goodbye on the bus right as they leave, in the ice cold rain. The ice cold rain could burn against her warm tears. Then as the bus drives away, Hope pathetically chases after it, only to stop, fall on the street in the rain, and cry, as Michael hopelessly watches her as he's leaving behind the love of his life.

Moreover, Michael could've written the song Amnesia about Hope, empathetically, that is, from her point of view. The song Amnesia is how Hope must have felt.

BUT that's just what I would do: that's just my thoughts: Feel free to use it, to use some of the ideas, or to ignore it. Again, sorry for the super long comment, and if you made it this far, thank you for reading :)

@Luke's_Lip_ring96
tysm means a lot to me that you guys like It xxx

Love <3

@UndercoverReject
Awww that is so sweet of you! I love your writing and story ideas too. Thank you so much for reading, it really does mean so much to me and that comment just made my day ❤

OH MY GOD YES I LOVE THIS IDEA AMD YOUR WRITING SO WHEN YOU PUT IT TOGETHER I MAY JUST DIE FROM BEING OVERWHELMED WITH HAPPINESS