Allure - Comments

@mstheodora
Hey I've been busy lately. I have a piece of the chapter written, I just need to finish it. Sorry again!

Where have you gone?

@spectrum
Aww that's really sweet of you. If you wanna comment on anything that would be nice, I get a lot of silent readers so I don't know who is reading my stories until they tell me. :) It helps with the updating too. I read other people to get inspired also. I'm flattered you said that about my writing.

@prismdreams
No I haven't gotten around to commenting on anything else yet! I'm trying to read through as much as I can in the hopes of getting a little inspiration to possibly write something.

@spectrum
I don't forget to message people back, especially if they've taken the time to read what I write and comment. It means something to me. Oh? Which stories are those? Did you leave a comment? I don't know if I had gotten it. Haha thanks, binge reading is great. I've done that before. x)

@prismdreams
You're welcome. I'm glad you saw this and thank you for getting back to me. So many of the authors on here don't bother replying at all. If it's okay for me to say, after also reading everything else you've written in a binge; I'm in total awe of your writing ability. It's absoluetly perfect.

@spectrum
I'm not even sure what to say to this...just speechless that anyone reads what I write and lets me know. I post my stories nonchalantly on this site, not really expecting responses, especially ones like these. Wow! Thank you. I had this idea for a while and it dates back a little bit to my roots of when I first wrote stories. I'm not published at all. I do this for fun, this was a great surprise, thank you! I'm updating soon, I hope I might see you back when I post new chapters. Thank you so much!!!

Will you be updating this at all? I can't believe I just stumbled across all your work. I feel like I've been missing out so hardcore on well written and imaginative fiction. You have such a gift; are you professionally published at all? If not, you sure as hell should be.

@theodora
haha I didn't mean to say you were lying to me it's just I don't ever see comments on my stories like this one, ever.
i'm trying to have an actual plot in this one so it makes sense to see it in the real world. thanks for saying it conveys that, i don't always know how it comes off.

i have a whole idea planned for one but i'm going to spread out what i wanna do in many chapters to come. i don't know if you will come back, i don't always have people commenting on my stories that stay with me to the end but it'd be really nice if you did. you're lovely. thank you for saying all these nice things about my writing. i'm sitting here blushing profusely lol i have started ch 4 and i plan on posting it when i finish it. thank you! :) (Louis is my rock xD btw)

@prismdreams
YES THIS IS TOTALLY REAL!
Honestly, every word I typed before is the truth. The things you write are much more than half decent they are INCREDIBLE! (ps: sorry for all the caps). Realism within stories is something a lot of authors fail with or completely end up forgetting but you encapsulate so much raw image with the detail you write - it's such a refreshing thing to see.

I am so ready for an amazing piece of work that toys with a side of maturity. Plus - there's Louis thrown into the mix. I mean seriously it's a combination which can't go wrong. I'm glad to hear you've started chapter 4 and I can't wait to read it once it's up x

@theodora
this isn't real is it? this is like one of those dreams where you know you're dreaming? da huh?!
i mean i don't know what to say to this, when i read my stuff back i don't know if it's halfway decent, i try to make them true to life, or true to how life works. since it's not a supernatural.
this is one of my more darker stories so it's going to have more depth to it and more adult themes i don't normally go into with my stories, so it's a little bit of a challenge to write.
i've started on chapter 4 just in the beginning and it might come out soon so that's the good news.
one thing you noticed that i'm in the habit of doing is creating something mature. i guess it worked, wow, thank you from the bottom of my heart. this was such an amazing comment to read. genuinely surprised. i hope you're having a good day/night wherever you are. thank you so much!!! :)

Okay, okay, okay. First things first - you've easily become my favorite writer on this site. Honestly, I feel so moved when I read anything you've written - your way with words is flawless and unbelievably amazing, I truly hope you're aware of this. Ugh - the character development in this story is so on point and rich and I can't believe there aren't any more than 3 chapters. Your dialogue, storyline, character habits/quirks, tense are all magnificent. I can't believe I've stumbled across something as brilliant as the work you've created. You should be so insanely proud of yourself. ps: the maturity in this story is unbelievably refreshing!