The bitch and the dick - Comments

@NolanBronx
Well I'planning on slowly telling the reason why she acts this way. Ans I'll be sure to fix the typos! Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it :)

I like how sassy Zoe is!! I would develop her more and try not to just throw it out there, like show how she is sarcastic, bitchy, and witty. Also, reread your sections because there are a few typos that can be easily fixed but overall, you have a great idea! I am subbing to see how you develop it

xoxo