My nerd - Comments

@DazzlingPhy

it's cool I agree with you one hundred percent and with that whole Louis' singing voice thing. All of there voices are amazing. so good jod

@DazzlingPhy

it's cool I agree with you one hundred percent and with that whole Louis' singing voice thing. All of there voices are amazing. so good jod

OK I'm sorry for rambling on about zayn... I really needed to get that out. To make you feel better here is niall and a potato

IM BAAACKKKK. Time to update:-D :-D :-D

OK so... I'm going to a place that may or may not have WiFi... And I will be there for a week. So If there is i will update, if now you have to wait. Love you my beauts...

(What should I call you guys?? You know like they say directioners...what should you guys be called?) In the comments rate this story 1-10.... So I know how to improve

Nice

WOW! Love it!

OK so Marcel outfit didn't show so hear it is

When are you going to do more.

Hey all I'm updating today!!^_^ So be ready my beauts

MORE!!!!!!

@DazzlingPhy

YAAAAAAY UPDATE TIME
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Ain't no thang

@DazzlingPhy
No worries :) I've voted and subscribed x

@Malina Tomlinson
Thanks ^_^

@xRockMex
Thanks for the suggestion, that's really helpful and I'm glad you like it

Thx, I will work on tht

I Like it alot

I like the idea and you're not a bad Writer at all. The only thing I struggled with was when different characters spoke, they were all mixed together, may be easier if you seperate each character's line on different sentences if that makes sense? As I got confused who was saying what.

Besides that, you're good at writing. Although I don't tend to read stories like this, I'm interested to see how it all works out for poor Marcel.
oh and don't call it lame just because it's different, :( I'm sure you'll attract readers soon :)
Happy Writing :)