WHO DAT? - Comments

I will do one chapter now just for you thanks

Really want to read more! It's soooo good(;

Please comment if you like or have feedback on things i need to do to improve!
Thanks loves!

Oh thanks who are you?

I love this!!

no that's cool take your time i'm not rushinng you

@Malina Tomlinson
okie dokie honey. I have work and school and homework so its hard to even update my stories but I'll help when i can.

@hazzahstyles19
Here sorry but i changed who is in charge of the group Zayn is now the leader. and in chapter two everything stays the same except for the parts where they say harry and his gang it should say harry and his friends

Oh good thank you and i would like tha i think that if you do that then it would help. Yeah haveing Dyslexia makes it hard to spell. I wish i could spell well.

I like the plot in the first chapter but giiiiiirrrrrlllll you have some major spelling errors and punctuation mistakes! I really think a little more detail in some areas of this chapter would really help. When I have time and if you want me to, I can rewrite the first chapter and give you a little instruction on what would need to improve. But, other than that, I like it. :)