Demented ➳ h.s [Editing Starting Soon] - Comments

@Hopeless Directioner
Actually, the whole summary is different. I made up a quote that may or may not go into the story and just the basic summary isn't even a summary, it's suspenseful. Again, I hope you like the new version as much as you liked the old.

@Hopeless Directioner
Some will be minute but most will be obvious. Some conversations are edited so that Harry is more closed up. All in all, the story will be longer. There is a new introduction and just a bunch of things I wasn't comfortable with. A lot of editing was needed and the cover was terrible. And so, the edited first chapter is up along with a new introduction. I really hope you like it, darling x

@wonderful .
I'm excited to see how it'll be revised! Will the changes be minute or obvious?

@Hopeless Directioner

I will be editing and taking out and adding in parts. Honestly, Demented went waaay too fast in my opinion, and with the plagiarism and all, I found that I really want to rewrite it anyway. I will obviously be keeping this version up but I have already started the new version and the whole first chapter is different. I just think the story could have stretched at least to 35 chapters or more. Again, this WILL stay up, but the new version will be posted separately. Mind you, it will take at least a few months for me to do it since I have other stories, but I'm sick from school today so I'm going to continue. I was hoping everyone would like that it's being revised and bettered a bit, do you?

Wait, I think I missed completely something really important. What do you mean by you're rewriting this?

@Curly'sgirly
aw!!!
thank you for reading x

I LOVE THIS. thank you so much for writing!xx

@Hopeless Directioner
Aw, you're so sweet. Of course I will.

@wonderful .
I'll be sure to read them then! It's good to know I make your day, haha.
I hate asking, but would you mind taking a look at my story, Don't Burn Out? I'm new to this and I would love some feedback from someone who obviously knows what they're doing.
So if you want to, you can read it at:
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/35244/Dont-Burn-Out/

@Hopeless Directioner
I already have another story called Paper Stars out and a story coming soon that has the first two intro's posted called Heart of Arrows, it's an interesting story about a blind girl, Harry, and Marcel. I think you might like it. And it doesn't matter when you came along, I love you anyways, you are one of the many that make my day <3

Aww, I loved it! I'm kind of upset that it's over, but it was a great story! I know I came along near the end of your writing this story, so I can't wait to see what else you have to write!

@XOXOH
Ugh, don't get me started. The jokes we have are amazing and I'm glad that you stuck with my constant problems and I love that you love my writing. Thank you soooooooooooo much for being a great reader and friend, and I can't wait for your stories, chick. Love you too x and I can't believe it's over ;(

Aww Yaay I loved it!!! You really have become a great friend along the way and your writing skill is a force to be reckoned with! I cant wait for your other stories to unfold! Love you and what a great end to a great book Xx

@wonderful .
You too:* ♡

@Hazza4lyfe
Aha, I know rightttttt..

Oh.My.God!

@wonderful .
Lol oh God

@XOXOH
awwwww thanks xo

YOU BETTER NOT DISAPPOINT ME IN THE NEXT CHAPTER OF ITP.. Charlotte might kill you too ;)

Ahhhhhh! Oh my Gosh! This is crazy They need to get back to the court and fast! This chapter is perfect