When you Smile - Comments

please update!

@harrystylesiloveyou Thank you! All the character will connect somehow, so hopefully once it gets a little depper it will make more sense :]

No problem, I understand. & That's a genious plot <3

@harrystylesiloveyou Eh, I'm sorry if I came off rude. I fixed the chapters to where yo can tell whose point of view it is, but it was there on the main summary page. This is a One Direction story, but it's based as if the boys never tried out for the X-Factor. They still have dreams of music but they never met Simon to actually put them together, but somehow fate brought them together as a whole so they're friends.

I apologize if this was cofusing on who it was about, I posted this here before I realized there was a 1D site I could have posted on.

@harrystylesiloveyou In the Chapter description, right under the title it tells you whose point of view it is... And there isn't a "main character" per say. It's about all of the boys, did you not read the summary?

Whose the main character and which boy is this fanfic about?!?!?!

This is really confusing ! You need to put whose point of view it's it... I don't get it otherwise