One Look - Comments

@Marcel Is A Cutie
THANKS

i love this story!!!!!!!!!!! its amazing:)

and a BIG happy birthday to Harry!!!!!!! <3 <3

@TALKNERDYTOME
so i will make a chapter if you correct the mistakes

@sweethoneybee10
thanks.and

@true_love tanks

@TALKNERDYTOME
I just updated ok :)

@true_love thanks I'll try

I really like this so! but you should update more often!(:

@Simple_But_Effective

Thank you for reading me and Kailani's story. ~ Arianna

@sweethoneybee10
It's Fine :)
WishYou A Great Day !

@OneDirectionLoves


@OneDirectionLovesMe
sorry i didnt mean to say it like that

@sweethoneybee10
What do you mean...?
i really wasn't trying to sound mean just ...its true

@OneDirectionLovesMe
Its fine nothing i havent heard

Ok....I have a story called TAKEN
and I think if you want more views, and subscribers, you should: update a lot for your subscribers, correct your misspellings, make the chapters much longer, and when you're done, double check.. you got Lots of work to do...
xx Andrea A.K.A. OneDirectionLovesMe
P.S I wasn't trying to sound mean

@sweethoneybee10

oh , ok.

@ilovehazza
i know but i do all of this on my phone so its hard

It's good , but a l of people have a lot more understanding in stories with correct punctuation .